[svnbook commit] r1284 - trunk/src/en/book

[cmpilato]

Author: cmpilato
Date: Sat May 14 12:42:53 2005
New Revision: 1284

Modified:
   trunk/src/en/book/ch07.xml
Log:
Minor corrections, spurred by Ben.

Modified: trunk/src/en/book/ch07.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/en/book/ch07.xml	(original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/ch07.xml	Sat May 14 12:42:53 2005
@@ -1797,12 +1797,9 @@
       project's new name, so <filename>concept</filename> is renamed
       to <filename>frabnaggilywort</filename>.  Life goes on,
       Frabnaggilywort releases a 1.0 version, and is downloaded and
-      used daily by teems of people aiming to improve their
+      used daily by hordes of people aiming to improve their
       lives.</para>
     
-    <!--  "teem" is only a verb, so cmike:  please change to 'hordes'
-           or something... -->
-
     <para>It's a nice story, really, but it doesn't end there.
       Entrepreneur that you are, you've already got another think in
       the tank.  So you make a new directory,
@@ -1835,9 +1832,9 @@
       revision is all that is needed to refer to a specific line of
       history.  Peg revisions are specified to the Subversion
       command-line client using <firstterm>at syntax</firstterm>, so
-      called because the syntax involves appending an <quote>at
-      sign</quote> at the peg revision to the end of the path with
-      which the revision is associated.</para>
+      called because the syntax involves appending an ampersand (or
+      <quote>at sign</quote>) at the peg revision to the end of the
+      path with which the revision is associated.</para>
 
     <para>But what of the <option>--revision (-r)</option> of which
       we've spoken so much in this book?  That revision (or set of