[svnbook commit] r1332 - in trunk/src/en: . book

[C. Michael Pilato]

sussman wrote:

>Author: sussman
>Date: Tue May 24 21:37:49 2005
>New Revision: 1332
>
>Modified: trunk/src/en/book/ch07.xml
>==============================================================================
>--- trunk/src/en/book/ch07.xml	(original)
>+++ trunk/src/en/book/ch07.xml	Tue May 24 21:37:49 2005
>@@ -2477,7 +2477,7 @@
>   </sect1>
> 
>   <!-- ******************************************************************* -->
>-  <!-- *** SECTION 5:  LOCALIZATION                                 *** -->
>+  <!-- *** SECTION 5:  LOCALIZATION                                    *** -->
>   <!-- ******************************************************************* -->
>   <sect1 id="svn-ch-7-sect-5">
>     <title>Localization</title>
>@@ -2554,7 +2554,7 @@
> $ svn help cat
> cat: Ausgabe des Inhaltes der angegebenen Dateien oder URLs
> Aufruf: cat ZIEL...
>-[...]
>+…
> </screen>
>  
>
Ah ... music to my eyes ...

>@ -2635,6 +2635,82 @@
> 
>   </sect1>
> 
>+  <!-- ******************************************************************* -->
>+  <!-- *** SECTION 6:  URL Construction                                *** -->
>+  <!-- ******************************************************************* -->
>+  <sect1 id="svn-ch-7-sect-6">
>+    <title>URL Construction</title>
>+
>+    <para>In Chapter 2, you saw a table that listed the different URL
>+      schemes available to a Subversion client.  That wasn't the
>+      entire story.  Complex setups or server locations sometimes
>+      demand more complex URLs.  Here we explain a few important
>+      edge-cases in the way Subversion parses URLs.</para>
>  
>
GACK!  You actually said "In Chapter 2" instead of using the <xref> 
markup!  And less scary, but still of concern, you assumed the user read 
Chapter 2.  :-)  Name the section "Subversion Repository URLs", and 
begin with a brief (if redundant -- who cares) "Subversion uses URLs to 
identify blah blah blah"

>+    <para>Finally, it should be noted that the Subverison client will
>  
>
That's the "Subversion" client.  (spellcheck)