[svnbook commit] r2121 - trunk/src/en/book
Blair Zajac
blair at orcaware.com
Wed Apr 12 12:05:35 CDT 2006
C. Michael Pilato wrote:
> Max Bowsher wrote:
>
>>Blair Zajac wrote:
>>
>>
>>>>sussman wrote:
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>>Author: sussman
>>>>>Date: Tue Apr 11 17:49:29 2006
>>>>>New Revision: 2121
>>>>>
>>>>
>>>>...
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>>+ <para>In this section, and almost everywhere in this book, the
>>>>>+ words <quote>lock</quote> and <quote>locking</quote> describe
>>>>>+ a mechanism for mutual exclusion between users to avoid
>>>>>+ clashing commits. Unfortunately, there are two other sorts
>>>>>+ of <quote>lock</quote> with which Subversion, and therefore
>>>>
>>>>s/lock/locks/
>>
>>
>>Interesting.
>>
>>I don't claim to be a grammar expert, but I would have chosen 'lock'
>>over 'locks' here too.
>
>
> I, too, think the grammar is correct (though admittedly a bit awkward for
> me). But consider the sentence this way:
>
> Unfortunately, the is one other sort of lock with which ...
>
> Now, to make that "one" into "two", what are we incrementing? The actual
> number of locks? No. We're incrementing the number of lock types (or "sorts").
I agree with the singular sentence here, but to apply mathematical increments to
the English language doesn't mean it's right :)
Most of the time, you read "sorts of plural_word".
Anyway, I did some Googling searching and didn't find anything.
This is getting bike-sheddy.
Blair
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