[svnbook commit] r2841 - trunk/src/en/book
C. Michael Pilato
cmpilato at red-bean.com
Mon Aug 13 09:19:21 CDT 2007
sussman wrote:
> Author: sussman
> Date: Sun Aug 12 22:23:03 2007
> New Revision: 2841
[...]
> + <warning>
> <para>While your working copy is <quote>just like any other
> collection of files and directories on your system</quote>,
> you can edit files at will, but you must tell Subversion
> @@ -241,11 +240,12 @@
> <command>svn move</command> instead of the copy and move
> commands provided by your operating system. We'll talk more
> about them later in this chapter.</para>
> - </note>
> + </warning>
Nit: <warning> tag indentation is off a bit here.
> @@ -780,16 +792,15 @@
> </screen>
>
> <para>This is the <quote>long form</quote> output of
> - <command>svn status</command>. The first column remains the
> - same, but the second column shows the working-revision of
> - the item. The third and fourth columns show the revision in
> - which the item last changed, and who changed it (these
> - columns are not to be confused with the columns of
> - characters that we just discussed).</para>
> -
> - <para>None of the above invocations to <command>svn
> - status</command> contact the repository, they work only
> - locally by comparing the metadata in the
> + <command>svn status</command>. The leters in the first
"leters" ?
> @@ -2594,7 +2594,7 @@
> to give the project a name.
> <footnote>
> <para><quote>You're not supposed to name it. Once you name it,
> - you start getting attached to it.</quote> — Mike
> + you start getting attached to it.</quote>—Mike
> Wazowski</para>
> </footnote>
Nit: For quote references like this, I think we want the spaces around the
dash. This isn't a near-parenthetical flow interruption, it's a
quote/attribution delineation.
--
C. Michael Pilato <cmpilato at red-bean.com>
"The Christian ideal has not been tried and found wanting. It has
been found difficult; and left untried." -- G. K. Chesterton
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