[svnbook commit] r2841 - trunk/src/en/book

C. Michael Pilato cmpilato at red-bean.com
Mon Aug 13 09:19:21 CDT 2007


sussman wrote:
> Author: sussman
> Date: Sun Aug 12 22:23:03 2007
> New Revision: 2841

[...]

> +      <warning>
>          <para>While your working copy is <quote>just like any other
>            collection of files and directories on your system</quote>,
>            you can edit files at will, but you must tell Subversion
> @@ -241,11 +240,12 @@
>            <command>svn move</command> instead of the copy and move
>            commands provided by your operating system.  We'll talk more
>            about them later in this chapter.</para>
> -      </note>
> +      </warning>

Nit:  <warning> tag indentation is off a bit here.

> @@ -780,16 +792,15 @@
>  </screen>
>  
>          <para>This is the <quote>long form</quote> output of
> -          <command>svn status</command>.  The first column remains the
> -          same, but the second column shows the working-revision of
> -          the item.  The third and fourth columns show the revision in
> -          which the item last changed, and who changed it (these
> -          columns are not to be confused with the columns of
> -          characters that we just discussed).</para>
> -
> -        <para>None of the above invocations to <command>svn
> -          status</command> contact the repository, they work only
> -          locally by comparing the metadata in the
> +          <command>svn status</command>.  The leters in the first

"leters" ?

> @@ -2594,7 +2594,7 @@
>        to give the project a name.
>        <footnote>
>          <para><quote>You're not supposed to name it.  Once you name it,
> -          you start getting attached to it.</quote> — Mike
> +          you start getting attached to it.</quote>—Mike
>            Wazowski</para>
>        </footnote>

Nit:  For quote references like this, I think we want the spaces around the
dash.  This isn't a near-parenthetical flow interruption, it's a
quote/attribution delineation.

-- 
C. Michael Pilato <cmpilato at red-bean.com>

"The Christian ideal has not been tried and found wanting.  It has
 been found difficult; and left untried."  -- G. K. Chesterton




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