[svnbook commit] r2847 - trunk/src/en/book

[fitz]

Author: fitz
Date: Mon Aug 13 22:20:24 2007
New Revision: 2847

Log:
Fixes suggested by cmike.

* src/en/book/ch09-reference.xml: Tweak.


Modified:
   trunk/src/en/book/ch09-reference.xml

Modified: trunk/src/en/book/ch09-reference.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/en/book/ch09-reference.xml	(original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/ch09-reference.xml	Mon Aug 13 22:20:24 2007
@@ -147,8 +147,8 @@
           </term>
           <listitem>
             <para>Uses the contents of the named file for the
-              specified subcommand, however, different subcommands do
-              different things with this content—for example,
+              specified subcommand, though different subcommands do
+              different things with this content.  For example,
               <command>svn commit</command> uses the content as a
               commit log, whereas <command>svn propset</command> uses
               it as a property value.</para>
@@ -1950,11 +1950,10 @@
 Committed revision 16.
 </screen>
 
-            <para>Be aware that this will <emphasis>not</emphasis>
-              create a directory named <filename>myproj</filename> in
-              the repository.  If that's what you want, simply add
-              <filename>myproj</filename> to the end of the
-              URL:</para>
+          <para>Be aware that this will <emphasis>not</emphasis>
+            create a directory named <filename>myproj</filename> in
+            the repository.  If that's what you want, simply add
+            <filename>myproj</filename> to the end of the URL:</para>
 
           <screen>
 $ svn import -m "New import" myproj http://svn.red-bean.com/repos/trunk/misc/myproj
@@ -5351,7 +5350,9 @@
             command fails, that means that your repository has at
             least one corrupted revision and you should restore the
             corrupted revision from a backup (you did make a backup,
-            didn't you?).</para> </refsect1>
+            didn't you?).</para>
+
+        </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
           <title>Examples</title>
@@ -6380,9 +6381,9 @@
           <term><option>--listen-port</option>=<replaceable>PORT</replaceable></term>
           <listitem>
             <para>Causes svnserve to listen on
-              <replaceable>PORT</replaceable> when run in daemon mode
+              <replaceable>PORT</replaceable> when run in daemon mode.
               (FreeBSD daemons only listen on tcp6 by default—this
-              option tells them to also listen on tcp4).</para>
+              option tells them to also listen on tcp4.)</para>
           </listitem>
         </varlistentry>