[svnbook commit] r2664 - in trunk/src/en: . book
cmpilato
noreply at red-bean.com
Wed Feb 7 01:35:43 CST 2007
Author: cmpilato
Date: Wed Feb 7 01:35:43 2007
New Revision: 2664
Modified:
trunk/src/en/TODO
trunk/src/en/book/ch-preface.xml
Log:
* src/en/book/ch-preface.xml
Fill in the boilerplate how-to-give-feedback stuff.
* src/en/TODO
Remove item.
Modified: trunk/src/en/TODO
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/en/TODO (original)
+++ trunk/src/en/TODO Wed Feb 7 01:35:43 2007
@@ -16,10 +16,6 @@
Since it is attempting to demonstrate proper Subversion pool coding style,
it ought to be using SVN_ERR() and svn_error_t everywhere. Might also
want to use APR_ARRAY_PUSH().
-
- * Fill in the "### boilerplate" stuff we left for O'Reilly. No
- reason for the book, printed or otherwise, to not include
- information about feeding bugs back into the svnbook OS community.
* (perhaps) suggest the use of environment variables to represent
long repository URLs. useful for lots of branching/tagging commands.
Modified: trunk/src/en/book/ch-preface.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/en/book/ch-preface.xml (original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/ch-preface.xml Wed Feb 7 01:35:43 2007
@@ -402,8 +402,8 @@
Subversion project developers, which were then coalesced into a
single work and rewritten. As such, it has always been under a
free license. (See <xref linkend="svn.copyright"/>.) In fact,
- the book was written in the public eye, as a part of Subversion.
- This means two things:</para>
+ the book was written in the public eye, originally as a part of
+ Subversion project itself. This means two things:</para>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
@@ -421,13 +421,16 @@
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
- <!-- O'Reilly Hardcopy Only
- <para>You can send publishing comments and questions to O'Reilly
- here: <remark>###insert boilerplate.</remark></para>
- -->
-
- <para>A relatively recent online version of this book can be found
- at <ulink url="http://svnbook.red-bean.com"/>.</para>
+ <!-- O'REILLY SHOULD TWEAK THIS PARAGRAPH -->
+ <para>The online home of this book's development and most of the
+ volunteer-driven translation efforts around it is <ulink
+ url="http://svnbook.red-bean.com"/>. There, you can find links
+ to the latest snapshots and tagged versions of the book in
+ various formats, as well as instructions for accessing the
+ book's Subversion repository (where lives its DocBook XML source
+ code). Feedback is welcome—encouraged, even. Please
+ submit all comments, complaints, and patches against the book
+ sources to <email>svnbook-dev at red-bean.com</email>.</para>
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