[svnbook commit] r3039 - trunk/src/en/book
cmpilato
noreply at red-bean.com
Tue Apr 22 09:54:02 CDT 2008
Author: cmpilato
Date: Tue Apr 22 09:54:02 2008
New Revision: 3039
Log:
Fix a few typos and usages.
* ch03-advanced-topics.xml
Change "switch" to "option"; remove hyphen from "multiline" per O'Reilly
word list.
* ch07-customizing-svn.xml
Remove hyphen from "multiline".
* ch09-reference.xml
Fix various typos; note --diff-copy-from option to 'svnlook diff'
and --full-paths option to 'svnlook tree'; another "multiline" fix.
Patch by: Larry Shatzer <larrys {at} gmail.com>
Modified:
trunk/src/en/book/ch03-advanced-topics.xml
trunk/src/en/book/ch07-customizing-svn.xml
trunk/src/en/book/ch09-reference.xml
Modified: trunk/src/en/book/ch03-advanced-topics.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/en/book/ch03-advanced-topics.xml (original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/ch03-advanced-topics.xml Tue Apr 22 09:54:02 2008
@@ -92,7 +92,7 @@
<para>The Subversion client understands a number of revision
keywords. These keywords can be used instead of integer
arguments to the <option>--revision</option>
- (<option>-r</option>) switch, and are resolved into specific
+ (<option>-r</option>) option, and are resolved into specific
revision numbers by Subversion:</para>
<variablelist>
@@ -475,7 +475,7 @@
<para>But we've been touting the flexibility that Subversion
offers for your property values. And if you are planning to
- have a multi-line textual, or even binary, property value, you
+ have a multiline textual, or even binary, property value, you
probably do not want to supply that value on the command line.
So the <command>propset</command> subcommand takes a
<option>--file</option> (<option>-F</option>) option for
Modified: trunk/src/en/book/ch07-customizing-svn.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/en/book/ch07-customizing-svn.xml (original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/ch07-customizing-svn.xml Tue Apr 22 09:54:02 2008
@@ -991,7 +991,7 @@
(<option>-m</option>) to provide a log message on the command
line. Unfortunately, it can be tricky to compose anything more
than a simple one-line message on the command line. Users want
- more flexibility—multi-line, free-form log message editing
+ more flexibility—multiline, free-form log message editing
on demand.</para>
<para>Subversion supports this by allowing you to specify an
Modified: trunk/src/en/book/ch09-reference.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/en/book/ch09-reference.xml (original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/ch09-reference.xml Tue Apr 22 09:54:02 2008
@@ -638,7 +638,7 @@
<replaceable>ARG</replaceable></term>
<listitem>
<para>When used with any command that writes to the
- repository, set the revision property, using thn
+ repository, set the revision property, using the
<replaceable>NAME=VALUE</replaceable> format,
<replaceable>NAME</replaceable> to
<replaceable>VALUE</replaceable>. When used with
@@ -1504,7 +1504,7 @@
children of <replaceable>DST</replaceable>, which must be
a directory.</para>
- <para>If no peg revision (ie
+ <para>If no peg revision (i.e.
<replaceable>@REV</replaceable>) is supplied, by default
the <literal>BASE</literal> revision will be used for
files copied from the working copy, while the
@@ -1810,7 +1810,7 @@
<para>Display the differences between
<replaceable>OLD-TGT</replaceable> as it was seen in
<replaceable>OLDREV</replaceable> and
- <replaceable>NEW-TGT</replaceable> as it was seen ain
+ <replaceable>NEW-TGT</replaceable> as it was seen in
<replaceable>NEWREV</replaceable>.
<replaceable>PATH</replaceable>s, if given, are relative
to <replaceable>OLD-TGT</replaceable> and
@@ -6365,6 +6365,7 @@
--transaction (-t)
--no-diff-added
--no-diff-deleted
+--diff-copy-from
</screen>
</refsect1>
@@ -6848,6 +6849,7 @@
--revision (-r) REV
--transaction (-t)
--show-ids
+--full-paths
</screen>
</refsect1>
@@ -8004,11 +8006,10 @@
<term><literal>svn:externals</literal></term>
<listitem>
- <para>If present on a directory, the value is a
- multi-line list of other paths and URLs the client
- should check out. See
- <xref
- linkend="svn.advanced.externals"/>.</para>
+ <para>If present on a directory, the value is a multiline
+ list of other paths and URLs the client should check
+ out. See
+ <xref linkend="svn.advanced.externals"/>.</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
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