[svnbook commit] r3258 - trunk/src/en/book
cmpilato
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Thu Aug 7 13:36:45 CDT 2008
Author: cmpilato
Date: Thu Aug 7 13:36:45 2008
New Revision: 3258
Log:
Convert icon descriptions back to full sentences.
Modified:
trunk/src/en/book/ch00-preface.xml
Modified: trunk/src/en/book/ch00-preface.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/en/book/ch00-preface.xml (original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/ch00-preface.xml Thu Aug 7 13:36:45 2008
@@ -240,16 +240,17 @@
the following icons as you read:</para>
<note>
- <para>Designates a special point of interest</para>
+ <para>This icon designates a special point of interest.</para>
</note>
<tip>
- <para>Designates a helpful tip or best practice</para>
+ <para>This icon designates a helpful tip or recommended best
+ practice.</para>
</tip>
<warning>
- <para>Designates a warning—pay close attention to
- these to avoid problems</para>
+ <para>This icon designates a warning. Pay close attention to
+ these to avoid running into problems.</para>
</warning>
</sect1>
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