[svnbook commit] r3258 - trunk/src/en/book

cmpilato noreply at red-bean.com
Thu Aug 7 13:36:45 CDT 2008

Author: cmpilato
Date: Thu Aug  7 13:36:45 2008
New Revision: 3258

Convert icon descriptions back to full sentences.


Modified: trunk/src/en/book/ch00-preface.xml
--- trunk/src/en/book/ch00-preface.xml	(original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/ch00-preface.xml	Thu Aug  7 13:36:45 2008
@@ -240,16 +240,17 @@
       the following icons as you read:</para>
-      <para>Designates a special point of interest</para>
+      <para>This icon designates a special point of interest.</para>
-      <para>Designates a helpful tip or best practice</para>
+      <para>This icon designates a helpful tip or recommended best
+        practice.</para> 
-      <para>Designates a warning—pay close attention to
-        these to avoid problems</para>
+      <para>This icon designates a warning.  Pay close attention to
+        these to avoid running into problems.</para>

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