[svnbook commit] r3261 - trunk/src/en/book
cmpilato
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Fri Aug 8 12:12:30 CDT 2008
Author: cmpilato
Date: Fri Aug 8 12:12:29 2008
New Revision: 3261
Log:
* src/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml
Re-add periods to a set of list items for consistency with the five
other similar, neighboring lists. Also, don't say "CGI software"
because not all repository browsing software technically uses the CGI
interface.
Modified:
trunk/src/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml
Modified: trunk/src/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml (original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml Fri Aug 8 12:12:29 2008
@@ -198,16 +198,16 @@
<itemizedlist>
<listitem><para>Quick and easy to set
- up</para></listitem>
+ up.</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>Network protocol is stateful and
- noticeably faster than WebDAV</para></listitem>
+ noticeably faster than WebDAV.</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>No need to create system accounts on
- server</para></listitem>
+ server.</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>Password is not passed over the
- network</para></listitem>
+ network.</para></listitem>
</itemizedlist>
</listitem>
@@ -228,7 +228,7 @@
errors.</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>No built-in web browsing. (You'd have to
- install a separate web server and some CGI software to
+ install a separate web server and repository browsing software to
add this.)</para></listitem>
</itemizedlist>
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