[svnbook commit] r3265 - trunk/src/en/book

[cmpilato]

Author: cmpilato
Date: Mon Aug 11 10:36:29 2008
New Revision: 3265

Log:
* src/en/book/ch09-reference.xml
  By way of followup to r3264, use a capitalization and sentence
  structure pattern consistent with other bits of the mod_X_svn
  directive descriptions.  Also, bind the xref that talks about
  disabling authz checks more tightly with the "Off" directive value.


Modified:
   trunk/src/en/book/ch09-reference.xml

Modified: trunk/src/en/book/ch09-reference.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/en/book/ch09-reference.xml	(original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/ch09-reference.xml	Mon Aug 11 10:36:29 2008
@@ -8674,7 +8674,7 @@
                 enough information for the client to know what
                 <emphasis>additional</emphasis> data to request from
                 the server.  When this directive is included with a
-                value of <literal>off</literal>,
+                value of <literal>Off</literal>,
                 <command>mod_dav_svn</command> will only ever respond
                 to these <literal>REPORT</literal> requests with
                 skelta responses, regardless of the type of responses
@@ -8688,7 +8688,7 @@
                 checkouts, thus leaving an audit trail of
                 <literal>GET</literal> and <literal>PROPFIND</literal>
                 requests in Apache's logs.  The default value of this
-                directive is <literal>on</literal>.</para>
+                directive is <literal>On</literal>.</para>
 
             </listitem>
           </varlistentry>
@@ -8697,7 +8697,7 @@
             <listitem>
 
               <para>When its value is
-                <literal>on</literal>, allows write requests from
+                <literal>On</literal>, allows write requests from
                 WebDAV clients to result in automatic commits.  A
                 generic log message is auto-generated and attached to
                 each revision.  If you enable autoversioning, you'll
@@ -8708,7 +8708,7 @@
                 <literal>mod_mime</literal> is able to, of course).
                 For more information, see <xref
                 linkend="svn.webdav"/>.  The default value of this
-                directive is <literal>off</literal>.</para>
+                directive is <literal>Off</literal>.</para>
 
             </listitem>
           </varlistentry>
@@ -8794,12 +8794,11 @@
 
               <para>Controls path-based authorization by enabling
                 subrequests (<literal>On</literal>), disabling
-                subrequests (<literal>Off</literal>), or querying
-                <command>mod_authz_svn</command> directly
-                (<literal>short_circuit</literal>).  See <xref
-                linkend="svn.serverconfig.httpd.authz.pathauthzoff"/>
-                for details.  By default, this directive's value is
-                <literal>On</literal>.</para>
+                subrequests (<literal>Off</literal>; see <xref
+                linkend="svn.serverconfig.httpd.authz.pathauthzoff"/>),
+                or querying <command>mod_authz_svn</command> directly
+                (<literal>short_circuit</literal>).  The default
+                value of this directive is <literal>On</literal>.</para>
 
             </listitem>
           </varlistentry>
@@ -9054,12 +9053,11 @@
             <listitem>
 
               <para>Set to <literal>Off</literal> to disable two
-                special-case behaviours of this
-                module:  interaction with the <literal>Satisfy
-                Any</literal> directive and enforcement of the
-                authorization policy even when no
-                <literal>Require</literal> directives are present.  By
-                default, this directive's value is
+                special-case behaviours of this module: interaction
+                with the <literal>Satisfy Any</literal> directive and
+                enforcement of the authorization policy even when no
+                <literal>Require</literal> directives are present.
+                The default value of this directive is
                 <literal>On</literal>.</para>
 
             </listitem>
@@ -9070,8 +9068,9 @@
             <listitem>
 
               <para>Set to <literal>Off</literal> to allow access
-                control to be passed along to lower modules.  By default,
-                this directive's value is <literal>On</literal>.</para>
+                control to be passed along to lower modules.  The
+                default value of this directive is
+                <literal>On</literal>.</para>
 
             </listitem>
           </varlistentry>
@@ -9082,9 +9081,9 @@
 
               <para>Set to <literal>On</literal> to suppress
                 authentication and authorization for requests which
-                anonymous users are allowed to perform.  By default,
-                this directive's value is
-                <literal>Off</literal>.</para>
+                anonymous users are allowed to perform.  The default
+                value of this directive is
+                <literal>On</literal>.</para>
 
             </listitem>
           </varlistentry>