[svnbook commit] r2985 - trunk/src/en/book

sussman noreply at red-bean.com
Sun Mar 2 21:19:52 CST 2008


Author: sussman
Date: Sun Mar  2 21:19:52 2008
New Revision: 2985

Log:
ch01-fundamental-concepts.xml:  enter ORA's copyedits.

Modified:
   trunk/src/en/book/ch01-fundamental-concepts.xml

Modified: trunk/src/en/book/ch01-fundamental-concepts.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/en/book/ch01-fundamental-concepts.xml	(original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/ch01-fundamental-concepts.xml	Sun Mar  2 21:19:52 2008
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@
       <emphasis>is</emphasis> a kind of file server, but it's not your
       usual breed.  What makes the Subversion repository special is
       that <emphasis>it remembers every change</emphasis> ever written
-      to it: every change to every file, and even changes to the
+      to it—every change to every file, and even changes to the
       directory tree itself, such as the addition, deletion, and
       rearrangement of files and directories.</para>
 
@@ -49,12 +49,13 @@
       sees only the latest version of the filesystem tree.  But the
       client also has the ability to view
       <emphasis>previous</emphasis> states of the filesystem.  For
-      example, a client can ask historical questions like, <quote>What
-      did this directory contain last Wednesday?</quote> or <quote>Who
-      was the last person to change this file, and what changes did he
-      make?</quote> These are the sorts of questions that are at the
-      heart of any <firstterm>version control system</firstterm>:
-      systems that are designed to track changes to data over time.
+      example, a client can ask historical questions such
+      as <quote>What did this directory contain last
+      Wednesday?</quote> or <quote>Who was the last person to change
+      this file, and what changes did he make?</quote> These are the
+      sorts of questions that are at the heart of
+      any <firstterm>version control system</firstterm>: systems that
+      are designed to track changes to data over time.
     </para>
   </sect1>
 
@@ -76,8 +77,8 @@
 
     <!-- =============================================================== -->
     <sect2 id="svn.basic.vsn-models.problem-sharing">
-      <title>The Problem of File-Sharing</title>
-      
+      <title>The Problem of File Sharing</title>
+
       <para>All version control systems have to solve the same
         fundamental problem: how will the system allow users to share
         information, but prevent them from accidentally stepping on
@@ -87,7 +88,7 @@
 
       <para>Consider the scenario shown in <xref
         linkend="svn.basic.vsn-models.problem-sharing.dia-1"/>.
-        Suppose we have two co-workers, Harry and Sally.  They each
+        Suppose we have two coworkers, Harry and Sally.  They each
         decide to edit the same repository file at the same time.  If
         Harry saves his changes to the repository first, then it's
         possible that (a few moments later) Sally could accidentally
@@ -107,11 +108,11 @@
       </figure>
 
       </sect2>
-    
+
     <!-- =============================================================== -->
     <sect2 id="svn.basic.vsn-models.lock-unlock">
       <title>The Lock-Modify-Unlock Solution</title>
-      
+
       <para>Many version control systems use a
         <firstterm>lock-modify-unlock</firstterm> model to address the
         problem of many authors clobbering each other's work.  In this
@@ -120,20 +121,20 @@
         Harry must <quote>lock</quote> a file before he can begin
         making changes to it.  If Harry has locked a file, then Sally
         cannot also lock it, and therefore cannot make any changes to
-        that file.  All she can do is read the file, and wait for
+        that file.  All she can do is read the file and wait for
         Harry to finish his changes and release his lock.  After Harry
         unlocks the file, Sally can take her turn by locking and
         editing the file.  <xref
         linkend="svn.basic.vsn-models.lock-unlock.dia-1"/>
         demonstrates this simple solution.</para>
-      
+
       <figure id="svn.basic.vsn-models.lock-unlock.dia-1">
         <title>The lock-modify-unlock solution</title>
         <graphic fileref="images/ch02dia3.png"/>
       </figure>
-      
+
       <para>The problem with the lock-modify-unlock model is that it's
-        a bit restrictive, and often becomes a roadblock for
+        a bit restrictive and often becomes a roadblock for
         users:</para>
 
       <itemizedlist>
@@ -148,7 +149,7 @@
             The situation ends up causing a lot of unnecessary delay
             and wasted time.</para>
         </listitem>
-        
+
         <listitem>
           <para><emphasis>Locking may cause unnecessary
             serialization.</emphasis>
@@ -161,7 +162,7 @@
             There's no need for them to take turns in this
             situation.</para>
         </listitem>
-    
+
         <listitem>
           <para><emphasis>Locking may create a false sense of
             security.</emphasis>
@@ -174,9 +175,9 @@
             prevent the problem—yet it somehow provided a false
             sense of security.  It's easy for Harry and Sally to
             imagine that by locking files, each is beginning a safe,
-            insulated task, and thus not bother discussing their
-            incompatible changes early on.  Locking often becomes a
-            substitute for real communication.</para>
+            insulated task, and thus they need not bother discussing
+            their incompatible changes early on.  Locking often
+            becomes a substitute for real communication.</para>
         </listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
 
@@ -185,7 +186,7 @@
     <!-- =============================================================== -->
     <sect2 id="svn.basic.vsn-models.copy-merge">
       <title>The Copy-Modify-Merge Solution</title>
-      
+
       <para>Subversion, CVS, and many other version control systems
         use a <firstterm>copy-modify-merge</firstterm> model as an
         alternative to locking.  In this model, each user's client
@@ -195,12 +196,12 @@
         simultaneously and independently, modifying their private
         copies.  Finally, the private copies are merged together into
         a new, final version.  The version control system often
-        assists with the merging, but ultimately a human being is
+        assists with the merging, but ultimately, a human being is
         responsible for making it happen correctly.</para>
-      
+
       <para>Here's an example.  Say that Harry and Sally each create
         working copies of the same project, copied from the
-        repository.  They work concurrently, and make changes to the
+        repository.  They work concurrently and make changes to the
         same file A within their copies.  Sally saves her changes to
         the repository first.  When Harry attempts to save his changes
         later, the repository informs him that his file A is
@@ -209,7 +210,7 @@
         it.  So Harry asks his client to <firstterm>merge</firstterm>
         any new changes from the repository into his working copy of
         file A.  Chances are that Sally's changes don't overlap with
-        his own; so once he has both sets of changes integrated, he
+        his own; once he has both sets of changes integrated, he
         saves his working copy back to the repository.  <xref
         linkend="svn.basic.vsn-models.copy-merge.dia-1"/> and <xref
         linkend="svn.basic.vsn-models.copy-merge.dia-2"/> show this
@@ -219,7 +220,7 @@
         <title>The copy-modify-merge solution</title>
         <graphic fileref="images/ch02dia4.png"/>
       </figure>
-      
+
       <figure id="svn.basic.vsn-models.copy-merge.dia-2">
         <title>The copy-modify-merge solution (continued)</title>
         <graphic fileref="images/ch02dia5.png"/>
@@ -231,7 +232,7 @@
         a problem.  When Harry asks his client to merge the latest
         repository changes into his working copy, his copy of file A
         is somehow flagged as being in a state of conflict: he'll be
-        able to see both sets of conflicting changes, and manually
+        able to see both sets of conflicting changes and manually
         choose between them.  Note that software can't automatically
         resolve conflicts; only humans are capable of understanding
         and making the necessary intelligent choices.  Once Harry has
@@ -255,16 +256,16 @@
         sense of security that a locking system will somehow prevent
         conflicts; in practice, locking seems to inhibit productivity
         more than anything else.</para>
-      
+
       <sidebar id="svn.basic.vsn-models.copy-merge.sb-1">
-        <title>When Locking is Necessary</title>
-        
+        <title>When Locking Is Necessary</title>
+
         <para>While the lock-modify-unlock model is considered
           generally harmful to collaboration, there are still times
           when locking is appropriate.</para>
 
         <para>The copy-modify-merge model is based on the assumption
-          that files are contextually mergeable: that is, that the
+          that files are contextually mergeable—that is, that the
           majority of the files in the repository are line-based text
           files (such as program source code).  But for files with
           binary formats, such as artwork or sound, it's often
@@ -274,26 +275,26 @@
           somebody ends up wasting time on changes that are ultimately
           discarded.</para>
 
-        <para>While Subversion is still primarily a copy-modify-merge
+        <para>While Subversion is primarily a copy-modify-merge
           system, it still recognizes the need to lock an occasional
-          file and thus provide mechanisms for this.  This feature is
-          discussed later in this book, in
+          file, and thus provides mechanisms for this.  This feature is
+          discussed later in this book in
           <xref linkend="svn.advanced.locking"/>.</para>
 
       </sidebar>
 
 
     </sect2>
-    
+
   </sect1>
-  
+
   <!-- How svn implements the philosophy -->
   <!-- ================================================================= -->
   <!-- ================================================================= -->
   <!-- ================================================================= -->
   <sect1 id="svn.basic.in-action">
     <title>Subversion in Action</title>
-    
+
     <para>It's time to move from the abstract to the concrete.  In
       this section, we'll show real examples of Subversion being
       used.</para>
@@ -301,48 +302,48 @@
     <!-- =============================================================== -->
     <sect2 id="svn.advanced.reposurls">
       <title>Subversion Repository URLs</title>
-  
+
       <para>Throughout this book, Subversion uses URLs to identify
         versioned files and directories in Subversion repositories.
         For the most part, these URLs use the standard syntax,
         allowing for server names and port numbers to be specified as
         part of the URL:</para>
-  
+
       <screen>
 $ svn checkout http://svn.example.com:9834/repos
 …
 </screen>
-  
+
       <para>But there are some nuances in Subversion's handling of URLs
         that are notable.  For example, URLs containing the
         <literal>file://</literal> access method (used for local
         repositories) must, in accordance with convention, have either a
         server name of <literal>localhost</literal> or no server name at
         all:</para>
-   
+
       <screen>
 $ svn checkout file:///var/svn/repos
 …
 $ svn checkout file://localhost/var/svn/repos
 …
 </screen>
-  
+
       <para>Also, users of the <literal>file://</literal> scheme on
         Windows platforms will need to use an unofficially
         <quote>standard</quote> syntax for accessing repositories
         that are on the same machine, but on a different drive than
         the client's current working drive.  Either of the two
-        following URL path syntaxes will work where
+        following URL path syntaxes will work, where
         <literal>X</literal> is the drive on which the repository
         resides:</para>
-  
+
       <screen>
 C:\> svn checkout file:///X:/var/svn/repos
 …
 C:\> svn checkout "file:///X|/var/svn/repos"
 …
 </screen>
-   
+
       <para>In the second syntax, you need to quote the URL so that the
         vertical bar character is not interpreted as a pipe.  Also, note
         that a URL uses forward slashes even though the native
@@ -360,37 +361,37 @@
           will not understand how to interact with that
           filesystem.</para>
       </note>
-      
+
       <para>Finally, it should be noted that the Subversion client will
         automatically encode URLs as necessary, just like a web browser
         does.  For example, if a URL contains a space or upper-ASCII
-        character:</para>
-  
+        character as in the following:</para>
+
       <screen>
 $ svn checkout "http://host/path with space/project/españa"
 </screen>
-      
-      <para>…then Subversion will escape the unsafe characters
+
+      <para>then Subversion will escape the unsafe characters
         and behave as if you had typed:</para>
-  
+
       <screen>
 $ svn checkout http://host/path%20with%20space/project/espa%C3%B1a
 </screen>
-  
+
       <para>If the URL contains spaces, be sure to place it within quote
         marks, so that your shell treats the whole thing as a single
         argument to the <command>svn</command> program.</para>
-  
+
     </sect2>
-  
+
     <!-- =============================================================== -->
     <sect2 id="svn.basic.in-action.wc">
       <title>Working Copies</title>
-      
+
       <para>You've already read about working copies; now we'll
         demonstrate how the Subversion client creates and uses
         them.</para>
-      
+
       <para>A Subversion working copy is an ordinary directory tree on
         your local system, containing a collection of files.  You can
         edit these files however you wish, and if they're source code
@@ -414,18 +415,18 @@
         maintained by Subversion, to help it carry out these commands.
         In particular, each directory in your working copy contains a
         subdirectory named <filename>.svn</filename>, also known as
-        the working copy <firstterm>administrative
+        the working copy's <firstterm>administrative
         directory</firstterm>.  The files in each administrative
         directory help Subversion recognize which files contain
-        unpublished changes, and which files are out-of-date with
+        unpublished changes, and which files are out of date with
         respect to others' work.</para>
-      
+
       <para>A typical Subversion repository often holds the files (or
         source code) for several projects; usually, each project is a
         subdirectory in the repository's filesystem tree.  In this
         arrangement, a user's working copy will usually correspond to
         a particular subtree of the repository.</para>
-      
+
       <para>For example, suppose you have a repository that contains
         two software projects, <literal>paint</literal> and
         <literal>calc</literal>.  Each project lives in its own
@@ -436,10 +437,10 @@
         <title>The repository's filesystem</title>
         <graphic fileref="images/ch02dia6.png"/>
       </figure>
-      
+
       <para>To get a working copy, you must <firstterm>check
         out</firstterm> some subtree of the repository.  (The term
-        <quote>check out</quote> may sound like it has something to do
+        <emphasis>check out</emphasis> may sound like it has something to do
         with locking or reserving resources, but it doesn't; it simply
         creates a private copy of the project for you.) For example,
         if you check out <filename>/calc</filename>, you will get a
@@ -456,14 +457,14 @@
 Makefile  integer.c  button.c  .svn/
 </screen>
 
-      <para>The list of letter A's in the left margin indicates that
+      <para>The list of letter As in the left margin indicates that
         Subversion is adding a number of items to your working copy.
         You now have a personal copy of the
         repository's <filename>/calc</filename> directory, with one
         additional entry—<filename>.svn</filename>—which
         holds the extra information needed by Subversion, as mentioned
         earlier.</para>
- 
+
       <para>Suppose you make changes to <filename>button.c</filename>.
         Since the <filename>.svn</filename> directory remembers the
         file's original modification date and contents, Subversion can
@@ -494,21 +495,20 @@
         working copy of <filename>/calc</filename> at the same time
         you did.  When you commit your change to
         <filename>button.c</filename>, Sally's working copy is left
-        unchanged; Subversion only modifies working copies at the
+        unchanged; Subversion modifies working copies only at the
         user's request.</para>
 
-      <para>To bring her project up to date, Sally can ask
-        Subversion to <firstterm>update</firstterm> her working copy,
-        by using the Subversion <command>update</command> command.
-        This will incorporate your changes into her working copy, as
-        well as any others that have been committed since she checked
-        it out.</para>
+      <para>To bring her project up to date, Sally can ask Subversion
+        to <firstterm>update</firstterm> her working copy, by using
+        the <command>update</command> command.  This will incorporate
+        your changes into her working copy, as well as any others that
+        have been committed since she checked it out.</para>
 
       <screen>
 $ pwd
 /home/sally/calc
 
-$ ls -A 
+$ ls -A
 .svn/ Makefile integer.c button.c
 
 $ svn update
@@ -520,7 +520,7 @@
         indicates that Subversion updated the contents of
         <filename>button.c</filename>.  Note that Sally didn't need to
         specify which files to update; Subversion uses the information
-        in the <filename>.svn</filename> directory, and further
+        in the <filename>.svn</filename> directory as well as further
         information in the repository, to decide which files need to
         be brought up to date.</para>
 
@@ -528,7 +528,7 @@
         <title>Repository URLs</title>
 
         <para>Subversion repositories can be accessed through many
-          different methods—on local disk, or through various
+          different methods—on local disk or through various
           network protocols, depending on how your administrator has
           set things up for you.  A repository location, however, is
           always a URL.
@@ -537,37 +537,37 @@
           methods.</para>
 
         <table id="svn.basic.in-action.wc.tbl-1">
-          <title>Repository Access URLs</title>
+          <title>Repository access URLs</title>
           <tgroup cols="2">
             <thead>
               <row>
                 <entry>Schema</entry>
-                <entry>Access Method</entry>
+                <entry>Access method</entry>
               </row>
             </thead>
             <tbody>
               <row>
                 <entry><literal>file:///</literal></entry>
-                <entry>direct repository access (on local disk)</entry>
+                <entry>Direct repository access (on local disk)</entry>
               </row>
               <row>
                 <entry><literal>http://</literal></entry>
-                <entry>access via WebDAV protocol to Subversion-aware
+                <entry>Access via WebDAV protocol to Subversion-aware
                   Apache server</entry>
               </row>
               <row>
                 <entry><literal>https://</literal></entry>
-                <entry>same as <literal>http://</literal>, but with
+                <entry>Same as <literal>http://</literal>, but with
                   SSL encryption.</entry>
               </row>
               <row>
                 <entry><literal>svn://</literal></entry>
-                <entry>access via custom protocol to an
+                <entry>Access via custom protocol to an
                   <literal>svnserve</literal> server</entry>
               </row>
               <row>
                 <entry><literal>svn+ssh://</literal></entry>
-                <entry>same as <literal>svn://</literal>, but through
+                <entry>Same as <literal>svn://</literal>, but through
                   an SSH tunnel.</entry>
               </row>
             </tbody>
@@ -581,10 +581,10 @@
         <xref linkend="svn.serverconfig"/>.</para>
 
       </sidebar>
-      
+
     </sect2>
-    
-    
+
+
     <!-- =============================================================== -->
     <sect2 id="svn.basic.in-action.revs">
       <title>Revisions</title>
@@ -592,22 +592,22 @@
       <para>An <command>svn commit</command> operation publishes
         changes to any number of files and directories as a single
         atomic transaction.  In your working copy, you can change
-        files' contents; create, delete, rename and copy files and
+        files' contents; create, delete, rename, and copy files and
         directories; then commit a complete set of changes as an
         atomic transaction.</para>
 
-      <para>By <quote>atomic transaction</quote>, we mean simply this:
-        either all of the changes happen in the repository, or none of
-        them happen.  Subversion tries to retain this atomicity in the
-        face of program crashes, system crashes, network problems, and
-        other users' actions.</para>
+      <para>By atomic transaction, we mean simply this: either all of
+        the changes happen in the repository, or none of them happen.
+        Subversion tries to retain this atomicity in the face of
+        program crashes, system crashes, network problems, and other
+        users' actions.</para>
 
       <para>Each time the repository accepts a commit, this creates a
         new state of the filesystem tree, called a
         <firstterm>revision</firstterm>.  Each revision is assigned a
         unique natural number, one greater than the number of the
         previous revision.  The initial revision of a freshly created
-        repository is numbered zero, and consists of nothing but an
+        repository is numbered 0 and consists of nothing but an
         empty root directory.</para>
 
       <para><xref linkend="svn.basic.in-action.revs.dia-1"/> illustrates a nice way to
@@ -703,14 +703,14 @@
 
       <itemizedlist>
         <listitem>
-          <para>what revision your working file is based on (this is
+          <para>What revision your working file is based on (this is
             called the file's <firstterm>working
-            revision</firstterm>), and</para>
+            revision</firstterm>) and</para>
         </listitem>
 
         <listitem>
-          <para>a timestamp recording when the local copy was last
-            updated by the repository.</para>
+          <para>A timestamp recording of when the local copy was last
+            updated by the repository</para>
         </listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
 
@@ -720,7 +720,7 @@
 
       <variablelist>
         <varlistentry>
-          <term>Unchanged, and current</term> 
+          <term>Unchanged, and current</term>
 
           <listitem>
             <para>The file is unchanged in the working directory, and
@@ -747,14 +747,15 @@
         </varlistentry>
 
         <varlistentry>
-          <term>Unchanged, and out-of-date</term> 
+          <term>Unchanged, and out-of-date</term>
 
           <listitem>
             <para>The file has not been changed in the working
               directory, but it has been changed in the repository.
-              The file should eventually be updated, to make it
-              current with the latest public revision.  An <command>svn
-              commit</command> of the file will do nothing, and an
+              The file should eventually be updated in order to make
+              it current with the latest public revision.
+              An <command>svn commit</command> of the file will do
+              nothing, and an
               <command>svn update</command> of the file will fold the
               latest changes into your working copy.</para>
           </listitem>
@@ -765,7 +766,7 @@
 
           <listitem>
             <para>The file has been changed both in the working
-              directory, and in the repository.  An <command>svn
+              directory and in the repository.  An <command>svn
               commit</command> of the file will fail with an
               <quote>out-of-date</quote> error.  The file should be
               updated first; an <command>svn update</command> command
@@ -801,11 +802,11 @@
 
       <!-- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -->
       <sect3 id="svn.basic.in-action.mixedrevs.update-commit">
-        <title>Updates and Commits are Separate</title>
+        <title>Updates and commits are separate</title>
 
         <para>One of the fundamental rules of Subversion is that
           a <quote>push</quote> action does not cause
-          a <quote>pull</quote>, nor the other way around.  Just
+          a <quote>pull,</quote> nor the other way around.  Just
           because you're ready to submit new changes to the repository
           doesn't mean you're ready to receive changes from other
           people.  And if you have new changes still in progress,
@@ -813,11 +814,11 @@
           repository changes into your own, rather than forcing you to
           publish them.</para>
 
-        <para>The main side-effect of this rule is that it means a
+        <para>The main side effect of this rule is that it means a
           working copy has to do extra bookkeeping to track mixed
-          revisions, and be tolerant of the mixture as well.  It's
-          made more complicated by the fact that directories
-          themselves are versioned.</para>
+          revisions as well as be tolerant of the mixture.  It's made
+          more complicated by the fact that directories themselves are
+          versioned.</para>
 
         <para>For example, suppose you have a working copy entirely at
           revision 10.  You edit the
@@ -831,17 +832,17 @@
           repository, since you haven't yet run <command>svn
           update</command>, and <command>svn commit</command> doesn't
           pull down new changes.  If, on the other hand,
-          <command>svn commit</command> <emphasis>were</emphasis> to
-          automatically download the newest changes, then it would be
-          possible to set the entire working copy to revision
-          15—but then we'd be breaking the fundamental rule
-          of <quote>push</quote> and <quote>pull</quote> remaining
-          separate actions.  Therefore the only safe thing the
-          Subversion client can do is mark the one
+          <command>svn commit</command> were to automatically download
+          the newest changes, then it would be possible to set the
+          entire working copy to revision 15—but then we'd be
+          breaking the fundamental rule of <quote>push</quote>
+          and <quote>pull</quote> remaining separate actions.
+          Therefore, the only safe thing the Subversion client can do
+          is mark the one
           file—<filename>foo.html</filename>—as being at
           revision 15.  The rest of the working copy remains at
           revision 10.  Only by running <command>svn update</command>
-          can the latest changes be downloaded, and the whole working
+          can the latest changes be downloaded and the whole working
           copy be marked as revision 15.</para>
 
       </sect3>
@@ -849,13 +850,13 @@
       <!-- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -->
       <sect3 id="svn.basic.in-action.mixedrevs.normal">
         <title>Mixed revisions are normal</title>
-          
+
         <para>The fact is, <emphasis>every time</emphasis> you run
           <command>svn commit</command>, your working copy ends up
           with some mixture of revisions.  The things you just
           committed are marked as having larger working revisions than
           everything else.  After several commits (with no updates
-          in-between) your working copy will contain a whole mixture
+          in between), your working copy will contain a whole mixture
           of revisions.  Even if you're the only person using the
           repository, you will still see this phenomenon.  To examine
           your mixture of working revisions, use the <command>svn
@@ -884,16 +885,17 @@
         <title>Mixed revisions are useful</title>
 
         <para>If your project is sufficiently complex, you'll discover
-          that it's sometimes nice to forcibly <firstterm>backdate</firstterm>
-          (or, update to a revision older than the one you already
-          have) portions of your working copy to an earlier revision; you'll
-          learn how to do that in <xref linkend="svn.tour"/>.  Perhaps
-          you'd like to test an earlier version of a sub-module
-          contained in a subdirectory, or perhaps you'd like to figure
-          out when a bug first came into existence in a specific file.
-          This is the <quote>time machine</quote> aspect of a version
-          control system—the feature which allows you to move
-          any portion of your working copy forward and backward in
+          that it's sometimes nice to
+          forcibly <firstterm>backdate</firstterm> (or, update to a
+          revision older than the one you already have) portions of
+          your working copy to an earlier revision; you'll learn how
+          to do that in <xref linkend="svn.tour"/>.  Perhaps you'd
+          like to test an earlier version of a submodule contained in
+          a subdirectory, or perhaps you'd like to figure out when a
+          bug first came into existence in a specific file.  This is
+          the <quote>time machine</quote> aspect of a version control
+          system—the feature that allows you to move any
+          portion of your working copy forward and backward in
           history.</para>
 
       </sect3>
@@ -904,15 +906,15 @@
 
         <para>However you make use of mixed revisions in your working
           copy, there are limitations to this flexibility.</para>
-          
+
         <para>First, you cannot commit the deletion of a file or
-          directory which isn't fully up-to-date.  If a newer version
+          directory that isn't fully up to date.  If a newer version
           of the item exists in the repository, your attempt to delete
-          will be rejected, to prevent you from accidentally
+          will be rejected in order to prevent you from accidentally
           destroying changes you've not yet seen.</para>
 
         <para>Second, you cannot commit a metadata change to a
-          directory unless it's fully up-to-date.  You'll learn about
+          directory unless it's fully up to date.  You'll learn about
           attaching <quote>properties</quote> to items in <xref
           linkend="svn.advanced"/>.  A directory's working revision
           defines a specific set of entries and properties, and thus




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