[svnbook commit] r3079 - trunk/src/en/book

[sussman]

Author: sussman
Date: Sat May 10 10:23:46 2008
New Revision: 3079

Log:
Fix some — , > <quote> usage.
Patch from Larry Shatzer <larrys at gmail.com>


Modified:
   trunk/src/en/book/ch04-branching-and-merging.xml
   trunk/src/en/book/ch05-repository-admin.xml
   trunk/src/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml

Modified: trunk/src/en/book/ch04-branching-and-merging.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/en/book/ch04-branching-and-merging.xml	(original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/ch04-branching-and-merging.xml	Sat May 10 10:23:46 2008
@@ -1301,8 +1301,8 @@
         particular revision tree, and the second coordinate is a path
         within that tree.  So every version of your file or directory
         can be defined by a specific coordinate pair.  (Remember the
-        <quote>peg revision</quote> syntax—foo.c at 224
-        —mentioned back in
+        <quote>peg revision</quote>
+        syntax—foo.c at 224—mentioned back in
         <xref linkend="svn.advanced.pegrevs"/>.) </para>
 
       <para>First, you might need to use <command>svn log</command> to
@@ -1397,7 +1397,7 @@
         works just as well:</para>
 
       <screen>
-$ svn cat http://svn.example.com/repos/calc/trunk/real.c@807 > ./real.c
+$ svn cat http://svn.example.com/repos/calc/trunk/real.c@807 > ./real.c
 
 $ svn add real.c
 A         real.c

Modified: trunk/src/en/book/ch05-repository-admin.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/en/book/ch05-repository-admin.xml	(original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/ch05-repository-admin.xml	Sat May 10 10:23:46 2008
@@ -2533,7 +2533,7 @@
 
 if [ "$USER" = "syncuser" ]; then exit 0; fi
 
-echo "Only the syncuser user may change revision properties" >&2
+echo "Only the syncuser user may change revision properties" >&2
 exit 1
 </programlisting>
       </example>
@@ -2556,7 +2556,7 @@
 
 if [ "$USER" = "syncuser" ]; then exit 0; fi
 
-echo "Only the syncuser user may commit new revisions" >&2
+echo "Only the syncuser user may commit new revisions" >&2
 exit 1
 </programlisting>
       </example>

Modified: trunk/src/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml	(original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml	Sat May 10 10:23:46 2008
@@ -1357,12 +1357,15 @@
 
         <para>(Note that this all must be on one line—truly on
         one line, since SSH <filename>authorized_keys</filename> files
-        do not even allow the conventional "<literal>\</literal>" for
-        line continuation.  Thus, there should be no line break and no
-        space between "<literal>no-port-forwarding,</literal>" and
-        "<literal>no-agent-forwarding,</literal>" in the example
-        above; the only reason we've formatted it with a line break is
-        to fit it on the physical page of a book.)</para>
+        do not even allow the
+        conventional <quote><literal>\</literal></quote> for line
+        continuation.  Thus, there should be no line break and no
+        space
+        between <quote><literal>no-port-forwarding,</literal></quote>
+        and
+        <quote><literal>no-agent-forwarding,</literal></quote> in the
+        example above; the only reason we've formatted it with a line
+        break is to fit it on the physical page of a book.)</para>
 
       </sect3>