[svnbook commit] r3288 - trunk/src/en/book

cmpilato noreply at red-bean.com
Wed Sep 3 23:50:51 CDT 2008

Author: cmpilato
Date: Wed Sep  3 23:50:50 2008
New Revision: 3288

More minor typo tweaks from Øyvind A. Holm <sunny at sunbase.org>, plus a
reworking of a couple of paragraphs for readability and to avoid an
awkward use of an mid-sentence screen output example.

* src/en/book/ch09-reference.xml


Modified: trunk/src/en/book/ch09-reference.xml
--- trunk/src/en/book/ch09-reference.xml	(original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/ch09-reference.xml	Wed Sep  3 23:50:50 2008
@@ -3114,19 +3114,20 @@
-            <para>If you run <command>svn log</command> on a specific
-              path and provide a specific revision and get no output
-              at all, as in the following:</para>
+            <para>Sometimes when you run <command>svn log</command> on
+              a specific path and a specific revision, you see no log
+              information output at all, as in the following:</para>
 $ svn log -r 20 http://svn.red-bean.com/untouched.txt
-            <para>that just means the path was not modified in
-              that revision.  If you log from the top of the
-              repository or know the file that changed in that
-              revision, you can specify it explicitly:</para>
+            <para>That just means the path wasn't modified in that
+              revision.  To get log information for that revision,
+              either run the log operation against the repository's
+              root URL, or specify a path that you happen to know was
+              changed in that revision:</para>
 $ svn log -r 20 touched.txt 
@@ -8258,7 +8259,7 @@
               the default behavior of <command>svndumpfilter</command>
               is to remove all revision properties except for the date
               and the log message (which will merely indicate that the
-              revision is empty).  Passing ths option will preserve
+              revision is empty).  Passing this option will preserve
               existing revision properties (which may or may not make
               sense since the related content is no longer present in
               the dump file).</para>

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