Changelist analogy confusing

[James Kistruck]

Michael,

That looks good, thanks.

On your change log:

> Tweak some wording to avoid implying untrue things only revealed as
>   untrue if the reader keeps reading long enough to hit the
revelation.
>   . o O ( Huh? ) 

These two sections seemed odd to me precisely because I didn't read the
docs in a linear manner.  I read around a bit, and then went back to
read it properly.  Maybe these sections weren't meant to be reference
material in that way, but as they are so easy to read I have come back
to them frequently.

James.

-----Original Message-----
From: C. Michael Pilato [mailto:cmpilato at red-bean.com] 
Sent: 04 September 2008 16:54
To: James Kistruck
Cc: SVNBook Developers
Subject: Re: Changelist analogy confusing

James Kistruck wrote:
> Sure.
> 
> I can't produce you a patch, but here is some sample text that would 
> make more sense to me.

James, I used your suggested edit locations, but took a slightly
different approach in r3293.  I hope the result meets your criteria:

   http://viewvc.red-bean.com/svnbook?view=revision&revision=3293

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