[svnbook] r3562 commited - * src/en/book/ch03-advanced-topics.xml...

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Revision: 3562
Author: stsp at elego.de
Date: Mon Jul 20 17:24:09 2009
Log: * src/en/book/ch03-advanced-topics.xml
   (svn.advanced.externals): Fix a revision number glitch in
    the example output, and simply say "external" instead of
    "file external" where the context prevents ambiguity.

http://code.google.com/p/svnbook/source/detail?r=3562

Modified:
  /trunk/src/en/book/ch03-advanced-topics.xml

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--- /trunk/src/en/book/ch03-advanced-topics.xml	Mon Jul 20 17:12:40 2009
+++ /trunk/src/en/book/ch03-advanced-topics.xml	Mon Jul 20 17:24:09 2009
@@ -3091,7 +3091,7 @@

      <para>When examining the file external with
        <command>svn info</command>, you can see the URL and revision
-      the file external is coming from:</para>
+      the external is coming from:</para>

      <screen>
  $ svn info www/green.html
@@ -3103,7 +3103,7 @@
  Node kind: file
  Schedule: normal
  Last Changed Author: harry
-Last Changed Rev: 42
+Last Changed Rev: 40
  Last Changed Date: 2009-07-20 20:38:20 +0100 (Mon, 20 Jul 2009)
  Text Last Updated: 2009-07-20 23:22:36 +0100 (Mon, 20 Jul 2009)
  Checksum: 01a58b04617b92492d99662c3837b33b
@@ -3112,10 +3112,10 @@
      <para>Because file externals appear in the working copy as
        versioned files, they can be modified and even committed
        if they reference a file at the HEAD revision. The committed
-      changes will then appear in the file external as well as
-      the file referenced by the external. However, in our example,
-      we pinned the file external to an older revision, so attempting
-      to commit the file external fails:</para>
+      changes will then appear in the external as well as the file
+      referenced by the external. However, in our example, we pinned
+      the external to an older revision, so attempting to commit
+      the external fails:</para>

      <screen>
  $ svn status