[PATCH] misdescription in the pre-unlock description in ch09-reference.xml

Kunio Miyamoto wakatono at todo.gr.jp
Mon Jun 8 10:37:34 CDT 2009


 Dear Subversion Book maintainers.
 I am Kunio Miyamoto, now working for translating Subversion book with
others.

 When we are reading this book, we found misdescription in
ch09-reference.xml.

 Mr. Kaisei Hamamoto sent me and made an question whether these are 
misdescriptions or not , then I checked these with descriptions around, and
I considered this misdescriptions truly.

 I corrected these appropriate description like an attached patch.

 Please check these modifications (patch) .

 Thanks.

*** ch09-reference.xml  2009-06-09 00:18:21.000000000 +0900
--- ch09-reference.xml.new      2009-06-09 00:19:36.000000000 +0900
***************
*** 9956,9966 ****
              <para>Repository path</para>
            </listitem>
            <listitem>
!             <para>Versioned path which is to be locked</para>
            </listitem>
            <listitem>
              <para>Authenticated username of the person attempting the
!               lock</para>
            </listitem>
          </orderedlist>
        </refsect1>
--- 9956,9966 ----
              <para>Repository path</para>
            </listitem>
            <listitem>
!             <para>Versioned path which is to be unlocked</para>
            </listitem>
            <listitem>
              <para>Authenticated username of the person attempting the
!               unlock</para>
            </listitem>
          </orderedlist>
        </refsect1>

---
宮本 久仁男 (Kunio Miyamoto) , PMP 
E-mail: wakatono at todo.gr.jp
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Microsoft MVP (Windows - Security , 2005/10 - 2008/1 
  Consumer - Security, 2008/2 - 2008/8, Enterprise Security, 2008/9 - 2009/9)
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