[svnbook] r4005 committed - * en/book/ch09-reference.xml...

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Revision: 4005
Author:   cmpilato at gmail.com
Date:     Tue Aug 16 12:21:14 2011
Log:      * en/book/ch09-reference.xml
   Minor wording tweaks.

http://code.google.com/p/svnbook/source/detail?r=4005

Modified:
  /trunk/en/book/ch09-reference.xml

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--- /trunk/en/book/ch09-reference.xml	Tue Aug 16 12:18:15 2011
+++ /trunk/en/book/ch09-reference.xml	Tue Aug 16 12:21:14 2011
@@ -8232,15 +8232,14 @@
              bypasses a valuable safeguard mechanism), it does aid in
              one very common use-case: initializing a copy of a
              repository as a mirror of the original.  This is
-            especially useful when setting up new mirrors of
+            especially handy when setting up new mirrors of
              repositories which contain a large amount of version
              history.  Rather than initialize a brand new repository as
              a mirror and then syncronize all of the history into it,
-            administrators will find that it
-            <emphasis>significantly</emphasis> faster to first make a
-            copy of a mature repository (perhaps
-            using <command>svnadmin hotcopy</command>) and then
-            use <command>svnsync initialize
+            administrators will find it <emphasis>significantly</emphasis>
+            faster to first make a copy of the mature repository
+            (perhaps using <command>svnadmin hotcopy</command>) and
+            then use <command>svnsync initialize
              --allow-non-empty</command> to initialize that copy as a
              mirror which is now already up-to-date with the
              original.</para>