[svnbook] r3842 committed - * src/en/book/ch00-preface.xml...

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Revision: 3842
Author:   cmpilato at gmail.com
Date:     Mon Jun 27 11:52:09 2011
Log:      * src/en/book/ch00-preface.xml
   (svn.intro.whatsnew): Tweak the section intro to be more timesafe.

http://code.google.com/p/svnbook/source/detail?r=3842

Modified:
  /trunk/src/en/book/ch00-preface.xml

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--- /trunk/src/en/book/ch00-preface.xml	Thu Jun 23 10:42:08 2011
+++ /trunk/src/en/book/ch00-preface.xml	Mon Jun 27 11:52:09 2011
@@ -405,16 +405,13 @@
          <secondary>history of</secondary>
        </indexterm>

-      <para>The first edition of this book was released in 2004,
-        shortly after Subversion had reached 1.0.  Over the following
-        four years Subversion released five major new versions, fixing
-        bugs and adding major new features.  While we've managed to
-        keep the online version of this book up to date, we're
-        thrilled that the second edition from O'Reilly now covers
-        Subversion up through release 1.5, a major milestone for the
-        project.  Here's a quick summary of major new changes since
-        Subversion 1.0.  Note that this is not a complete list; for
-        full details, please visit Subversion's web site at
+      <para>The first edition of this book was published by O'Reilly
+        Media in 2004, shortly after Subversion had reached 1.0.
+        Since that time, the Subversion project has continued to
+        release new major releases of the software.  Here's a quick
+        summary of major new changes since Subversion 1.0.  Note that
+        this is not a complete list; for full details, please visit
+        Subversion's web site at
          <ulink url="http://subversion.apache.org"/>.</para>

        <variablelist>