[svnbook] r4184 committed - Wrap-up my chapter 4 final read through review....

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Revision: 4184
Author:   ptburba at gmail.com
Date:     Tue Nov  8 13:00:33 2011
Log:      Wrap-up my chapter 4 final read through review.

* en/book/ch04-branching-and-merging.xml
   (svn.advanced.vendorbr,
    svn.advanced.vendorbr.svn_load_dirs): Some minor wording tweaks.


http://code.google.com/p/svnbook/source/detail?r=4184

Modified:
  /trunk/en/book/ch04-branching-and-merging.xml

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--- /trunk/en/book/ch04-branching-and-merging.xml	Tue Nov  8 12:22:54 2011
+++ /trunk/en/book/ch04-branching-and-merging.xml	Tue Nov  8 13:00:33 2011
@@ -3615,7 +3615,7 @@
        repository, you could also use Subversion's externals
        definitions to effectively <quote>pin down</quote> specific
        versions of that information to some location in your own
-      working copy directory (see
+      working copy (see
        <xref linkend="svn.advanced.externals" />).</para>

      <para>But sometimes you want to maintain custom modifications to
@@ -3909,10 +3909,9 @@
          are treated as regular additions and deletions.</para>

        <para>The script also accepts a separate configuration file for
-        setting properties on files and directories matching a regular
-        expression that are <emphasis>added</emphasis> to the
-        repository.  This configuration file is specified to
-        <command>svn_load_dirs.pl</command> using the
+        setting properties on <emphasis>added</emphasis> files and
+        directories which match a regular expression.  This configuration
+        file is specified to <command>svn_load_dirs.pl</command> using the
          <option>-p</option> command-line option.  Each line of the
          configuration file is a whitespace-delimited set of two or
          four values: a Perl-style regular expression against which to  
match the