[svnbook] r4072 committed - * en/book/ch00-preface.xml,...

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Revision: 4072
Author:   cmpilato at gmail.com
Date:     Thu Sep  8 06:48:55 2011
Log:      * en/book/ch00-preface.xml,
* en/book/ch01-fundamental-concepts.xml
   Read-thru edits.

http://code.google.com/p/svnbook/source/detail?r=4072

Modified:
  /trunk/en/book/ch00-preface.xml
  /trunk/en/book/ch01-fundamental-concepts.xml

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--- /trunk/en/book/ch00-preface.xml	Thu Sep  8 06:19:14 2011
+++ /trunk/en/book/ch00-preface.xml	Thu Sep  8 06:48:55 2011
@@ -367,7 +367,7 @@
            <listitem>
              <para>A custom standalone server program, runnable as a
                daemon process or invokable by SSH; another way to make
-              your repository available to others over a network.</para>
+              your repository available to others over a network</para>
            </listitem>
          </varlistentry>

@@ -387,6 +387,14 @@
            </listitem>
          </varlistentry>

+        <varlistentry>
+          <term>svnrdump</term>
+          <listitem>
+            <para>A program for performing repository history dumps
+              and loads over a network</para>
+          </listitem>
+        </varlistentry>
+
        </variablelist>

      </sect2>
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--- /trunk/en/book/ch01-fundamental-concepts.xml	Thu Aug 18 10:45:28 2011
+++ /trunk/en/book/ch01-fundamental-concepts.xml	Thu Sep  8 06:48:55 2011
@@ -537,7 +537,7 @@
              <row>
                <entry><literal>https://</literal></entry>
                <entry>Same as <literal>http://</literal>, but with
-                SSL encryption.</entry>
+                SSL encryption</entry>
              </row>
              <row>
                <entry><literal>svn://</literal></entry>
@@ -547,7 +547,7 @@
              <row>
                <entry><literal>svn+ssh://</literal></entry>
                <entry>Same as <literal>svn://</literal>, but through
-                an SSH tunnel.</entry>
+                an SSH tunnel</entry>
              </row>
            </tbody>
          </tgroup>
@@ -675,25 +675,34 @@
          those changes into your working copy (by reading from the
          repository).</para>

-      <!-- ### TODO:  This will change in 1.7! -->
-
        <para>A working copy also contains some extra files, created and
          maintained by Subversion, to help it carry out these commands.
-        In particular, each directory in your working copy contains a
-        subdirectory named <filename>.svn</filename>, also known as
-        the working copy's <firstterm>administrative
-        directory</firstterm>.  The files in each administrative
-        directory help Subversion recognize which files contain
-        unpublished changes, and which files are out of date with
-        respect to others' work.</para>
+        In particular, each working copy contains a subdirectory
+        named <filename>.svn</filename>, also known as the working
+        copy's <firstterm>administrative directory</firstterm>.  The
+        files in the administrative directory help Subversion
+        recognize which of your versioned files contain unpublished
+        changes, and which files are out of date with respect to
+        others' work.</para>
+
+      <note>
+        <para>Prior to version 1.7, Subversion
+          maintained <filename>.svn</filename> administrative
+          subdirectories in <emphasis>every</emphasis> versioned
+          directory of your working copy.  Subversion 1.7 offers a
+          completely new approach to how working copy metadata is
+          stored and maintained, and chief among the visible changes
+          to this approach is that each working copy now has only
+          one <filename>.svn</filename> subdirectory which is an
+          immediate child of the root of that working copy.</para>
+      </note>

        <!-- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -  
-->
        <sect3 id="svn.basic.in-action.track-repos">
          <title>How the working copy works</title>

          <para>For each file in a working directory, Subversion records
-          (among other things) two essential pieces of
-          information:</para>
+          (among other things) two essential pieces of information:</para>

          <itemizedlist>
            <listitem>