[svnbook] r4238 committed - Better explain what happens when a file is unlocked in chapter 1....

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Revision: 4238
Author:   richardcavell at mail.com
Date:     Sun Jan  1 17:38:52 2012
Log:      Better explain what happens when a file is unlocked in chapter 1.

(Discussed with Stefan Sperling)

http://code.google.com/p/svnbook/source/detail?r=4238

Modified:
  /trunk/en/book/ch01-fundamental-concepts.xml

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--- /trunk/en/book/ch01-fundamental-concepts.xml	Fri Nov 11 09:08:31 2011
+++ /trunk/en/book/ch01-fundamental-concepts.xml	Sun Jan  1 17:38:52 2012
@@ -197,10 +197,11 @@
            using locks.  Harry must <quote>lock</quote> a file before
            he can begin making changes to it.  If Harry has locked a
            file, Sally cannot also lock it, and therefore cannot make
-          any changes to that file.  All she can do is read the file
-          and wait for Harry to finish his changes and release his
-          lock.  After Harry unlocks the file, Sally can take her turn
-          by locking and editing the file.
+          any changes to that file.  All she can do is
+          wait for Harry to finish his changes, save the file and
+          release his lock.  After Harry unlocks the file, Sally
+          can take her turn by locking the file.  Then she may read
+          the latest version of the file and edit it.
            <xref linkend="svn.basic.vsn-models.lock-unlock.dia-1"/>
            demonstrates this simple solution.</para>