[svnbook] r4341 committed - * en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml...

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Revision: 4341
Author:   cmpilato at gmail.com
Date:     Mon Jan 21 07:18:28 2013
Log:      * en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml
   Fix a spelling oops and some ambiguously phrased prose.

Reported by: d.s{__AT__}daniel.shahaf.name
http://code.google.com/p/svnbook/source/detail?r=4341

Modified:
  /trunk/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml

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--- /trunk/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml	Fri Jan 18 13:54:40 2013
+++ /trunk/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml	Mon Jan 21 07:18:28 2013
@@ -598,12 +598,11 @@
        <sect3 id="svn.serverconfig.svnserve.invoking.xinetd">
          <title>svnserve via xinetd</title>

-        <para><command>xinetd</command> is a replacement of
-          the <command>inet</command> daemon which is used mainly in
-          Redhat-based distributions.  In order to
-          configure <command>svnserve</command>
-          for <command>xinetd</command>, you'll need to create a
-          configuration file <filename>/etc/xinetd.d/svn</filename>
+        <para>Some operating systems provide the <command>xinetd</command>
+          daemon as an alternative to <command>inetd</command>.
+          Fortunately, you can configure <command>svnserve</command> for
+          use with <command>xinetd</command>, too.  To do so, you'll need  
to
+          create a configuration file  
<filename>/etc/xinetd.d/svn</filename>
            with the following contents:</para>

          <informalexample>