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<big><big>Hi,<br>
<br>
I noticed some grammatical errors/typos in "Version Control With
Subversion." (The nightly build downloaded on November 26,
2010.)<br>
<br>
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<blockquote><big><big>"What makes the repository special is that
these as the files in the repository are changed"<br>
-- The word "these" doesn't belong.<br>
<br>
"A version control system's value comes in the fact"<br>
-- Should be "A version control system's value comes from
the fact."<br>
<br>
"its via working copies"<br>
-- Missing apostrophe; should be "it's via working copies."<br>
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<big><big><br>
If I spot any more errors as I continue reading, I'll let you
know.<br>
<br>
An omission? In the section How To Read This Book, unmentioned
is the unlucky reader who needs to install and administer a
Subversion server but doesn't yet have any such experience. (In
other words, people like me.) The only inexperienced readers
listed are those lucky enough to have someone else install and
administer the server.<br>
<br>
Regards and best wishes,<br>
Steve Eppley</big></big><br>
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