<div dir="ltr">Corrected in r5117, r5118, r5125 & 5183, 5184.<div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Thu, Mar 3, 2016 at 4:32 PM, C. Michael Pilato <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:cmpilato@red-bean.com" target="_blank">cmpilato@red-bean.com</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div dir="ltr">Review comments inline:<br><div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Wed, Mar 2, 2016 at 10:22 AM,  <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:lyalyakin@users.sourceforge.net" target="_blank">lyalyakin@users.sourceforge.net</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">Revision: 5117<br>
          <a href="http://sourceforge.net/p/svnbook/source/5117" target="_blank" rel="noreferrer">http://sourceforge.net/p/svnbook/source/5117</a><br>
<br></blockquote><div><br>[...]<br> <br></div><span><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">

Modified: trunk/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml<br>
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--- trunk/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml 2016-03-02 13:41:52 UTC (rev 5116)<br>
+++ trunk/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml 2016-03-02 15:22:08 UTC (rev 5117)<br>
@@ -2838,6 +2838,56 @@<br>
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       </sect3><br>
<br>
+      <!-- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - --><br>
+      <sect3 id="svn.serverconfig.httpd.authz.inrepo-authz"><br>
+        <title>Versioned In Repository Authorization Files</title><br>
+<br>
+        <para>Beginning with Subversion 1.8, authz files can be stored<br>
+          inside a Subversion repository.  It is possible to store the<br>
+          authorization file in the same repository to which the<br>
+          access rules are being applied or another repository.  This<br>
+          approach enables versioning features of Subversion for<br>
+          the path-based authorization.</para><br></blockquote><div><br></div></span><div>... the path-based authorization configuration.<br><br></div><div>(It's not the authorization that's being versioned.  It's the configuration files that govern said authorization.)<br></div><span><div> </div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
+<br>
+        <para>Both <literal>AuthzSVNAccessFile</literal> and<br>
+          <literal>AuthzSVNReposRelativeAccessFile</literal> configuration<br>
+          directives allow to specify in repo authorization file absolute<br>
+          or relative URL via local <literal>file://</literal> access method,<br>
+          but not <literal>svn://</literal> and <literal>http://</literal><br>
+          or <literal>https://</literal> methods.</para><br></blockquote><div><br></div></span><div>This paragraph is a bit confusing.  There's no such thing as a relative file:// URL.  The presence of the protocol at all ensures that the URL is absolute.  Also, it's best not to bother naming the other protocols because a) the list is incomplete (what about svn+ssh:// or a custom protocol?) and b) it confuses the matter.  Just say that we support relative URLs and absolute file:/// URLs.<br></div><span><div> </div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
+<br>
+        <para>For example, it is possible to specify absolute URL to in<br>
+          repository authz file as shown in<br></blockquote></span><div><br>...specify an absolute URL to an in-repository access file as shown in...<br> <br></div><span><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex">
+          <xref linkend="svn.serverconfig.httpd.authz.inrepo-authz.ex-1"/>.</para><br>
+<br>
+        <example id="svn.serverconfig.httpd.authz.inrepo-authz.ex-1"><br>
+          <title>Using single versioned in repo authz file</title><br>
+          <programlisting><br>
+&lt;Location /repos&gt;<br>
+  DAV svn<br>
+  SVNParentPath /var/svn<br>
+  AuthzSVNAccessFile file:///var/svn/authzrepo/authz<br>
+&lt;/Location&gt;<br>
+</programlisting><br>
+        </example><br>
+<br>
+        <para>You can also specify relative URL to in repository authz<br>
+          file as shown in<br></blockquote></span><div><br>...specify a relative URL to an in-repository access file, demonstrated in...<br><br></div><div>(Besides the grammar edit to include missing articles, it's best in prose to not be too repetitive.  Thus, "demonstrated in" as opposed to another instance of "as shown in".)<br></div></div><br></div></div></div>
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