<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=us-ascii"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space;" class="">After reading the section, I have understand the real meaning of title. Maybe<div class="">it is unnecessary to change it.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Thanks.</div><div class=""><br class=""><div><blockquote type="cite" class=""><div class="">On 13 Nov 2017, at 9:50 PM, C. Michael Pilato <<a href="mailto:cmpilato@red-bean.com" class="">cmpilato@red-bean.com</a>> wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><div class=""><div dir="ltr" class="">Well, that section is not actually about blocking of merge tracking, but rather about blocking commits made by clients that don't support merge tracking.<div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">The original sentiment is probably one best expressed using hyphens (as in, "Blocking Merge-Tracking-Unaware Clients"), but long strings of hyphens are generally frowned upon.    I notice that the 1.7 version of the book has this title as simply "Blocking Merge-Unaware Clients", which is an improvement grammatically, but still fails to reflect the scope of what's really happening.<div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Maybe we should change the title of that section to reflect the *goal* rather than the specific approach.  Perhaps something such as "Preserving Mergeinfo Integrity"?</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">-- Mike</div></div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br class=""><div class="gmail_quote">On Sun, Nov 12, 2017 at 1:36 AM, wuzhouhui <span dir="ltr" class=""><<a href="mailto:wuzhouhui14@mails.ucas.ac.cn" target="_blank" class="">wuzhouhui14@mails.ucas.ac.cn</a>></span> wrote:<br class=""><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">I'm not a English-native speaker, but according to my knowledge learned from<br class="">
school, should we add a preposition between "Tracking" and "Unaware", like<br class="">
"For"?<br class="">
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