[svnbook commit] r1517 - trunk/src/en/book
cmpilato
svnbook-dev at red-bean.com
Tue Jul 5 23:34:07 CDT 2005
Author: cmpilato
Date: Tue Jul 5 23:34:06 2005
New Revision: 1517
Modified:
trunk/src/en/book/appa.xml
trunk/src/en/book/appb.xml
trunk/src/en/book/ch04.xml
trunk/src/en/book/ch06.xml
trunk/src/en/book/ch07.xml
trunk/src/en/book/ch08.xml
Log:
Minor book fixes. Patch by Larry Shatzer <Larry.Shatzer at MIROtechnologies.com>.
* src/en/book/appa.xml,
* src/en/book/appb.xml,
* src/en/book/ch04.xml,
* src/en/book/ch06.xml,
* src/en/book/ch07.xml,
* src/en/book/ch08.xml
Fix places where > should be >, " to <quote>, and to remove space
around —. Also, use <guimenu> and <guimenuitem> tags where
appropriate.
Modified: trunk/src/en/book/appa.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/en/book/appa.xml (original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/appa.xml Tue Jul 5 23:34:06 2005
@@ -316,7 +316,7 @@
</sect1>
<!-- ================================================================= -->
- <!-- ======================== SECTION 5 ============================= -->
+ <!-- ======================== SECTION 5 ============================== -->
<!-- ================================================================= -->
<sect1 id="svn.forcvs.branches-and-tags">
<title>Branches and Tags</title>
Modified: trunk/src/en/book/appb.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/en/book/appb.xml (original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/appb.xml Tue Jul 5 23:34:06 2005
@@ -37,9 +37,9 @@
<para>The tragedy, though, is that the RFC 2518 WebDAV
specification does not provide any sort of model for version
- control, despite the "V" in DAV. Basic WebDAV clients and
- servers assume only one version of each file or directory
- exists, and can be repeatedly overwritten.</para>
+ control, despite the <quote>V</quote> in DAV. Basic WebDAV
+ clients and servers assume only one version of each file or
+ directory exists, and can be repeatedly overwritten.</para>
<para>Here are the concepts and terms introduced in basic
WebDAV:</para>
@@ -293,7 +293,7 @@
can ever learn to get everything it needs from a general DeltaV
server. On the other hand, mod_dav_svn *could* be further
developed to implement all of DeltaV, but it's hard to find
- motivation to do so — here are almost no DeltaV clients to
+ motivation to do so—here are almost no DeltaV clients to
interoperate with.</para>
</sect1>
@@ -640,10 +640,11 @@
<para>Apple's OS X operating system has an integrated
filesystem-level WebDAV client. From the Finder, select the
- "Connect to Server" item from the Go menu. Enter a WebDAV
- URL, and it appears as a disk on the desktop, just like any
- other mounted volume.<footnote><para>From the Darwin terminal,
- one can also run <literal>mount -t webdav URL
+ <guimenuitem>Connect to Server</guimenuitem> item from the
+ <guimenu>Go menu</guimenu>. Enter a WebDAV URL, and it
+ appears as a disk on the desktop, just like any other mounted
+ volume.<footnote><para>From the Darwin terminal, one can also
+ run <literal>mount -t webdav URL
/mountpoint</literal></para></footnote>.</para>
<para>Note that if your mod_dav_svn is older than version 1.2,
@@ -675,10 +676,10 @@
an explorer-level WebDAV client built-in, and operate just
fine against an autoversioning repository.</para>
- <para>In GNOME's Nautilus, from the File menu, select
- <quote>Open location</quote> and enter the URL. The
- repository should then be displayed like any other
- filesystem.</para>
+ <para>In GNOME's Nautilus, from the <guimenu>File
+ menu</guimenu>, select <guimenuitem>Open
+ location</guimenuitem> and enter the URL. The repository
+ should then be displayed like any other filesystem.</para>
<para>In KDE's Konqueror, you need to use the
<literal>webdav://</literal> scheme when entering the URL in
@@ -713,10 +714,9 @@
<para>Cadaver is a bare-bones Unix commandline program for
browsing and changing WebDAV shares. Like the Subversion
- client, it uses the neon HTTP library — not
- surprisingly, both neon and cadaver are written by the same
- author. Cadaver is free sofware (GPL license) and is
- available at <ulink
+ client, it uses the neon HTTP library—not surprisingly,
+ both neon and cadaver are written by the same author. Cadaver
+ is free sofware (GPL license) and is available at <ulink
url="http://www.webdav.org/cadaver/"/>.</para>
<para>Using cadaver is similar to using a commandline FTP
@@ -727,20 +727,20 @@
<screen>
$ cadaver http://host/repos
-dav:/repos/> ls
+dav:/repos/> ls
Listing collection `/repos/': succeeded.
-Coll: > foobar 0 May 10 16:19
- > playwright.el 2864 May 4 16:18
- > proofbypoem.txt 1461 May 5 15:09
- > westcoast.jpg 66737 May 5 15:09
+Coll: > foobar 0 May 10 16:19
+ > playwright.el 2864 May 4 16:18
+ > proofbypoem.txt 1461 May 5 15:09
+ > westcoast.jpg 66737 May 5 15:09
-dav:/repos/> put README
+dav:/repos/> put README
Uploading README to `/repos/README':
-Progress: [=============================>] 100.0% of 357 bytes succeeded.
+Progress: [=============================>] 100.0% of 357 bytes succeeded.
-dav:/repos/> get proofbypoem.txt
+dav:/repos/> get proofbypoem.txt
Downloading `/repos/proofbypoem.txt' to proofbypoem.txt:
-Progress: [=============================>] 100.0% of 1461 bytes succeeded.
+Progress: [=============================>] 100.0% of 1461 bytes succeeded.
</screen>
<para>DAV Explorer is another standalone WebDAV client, written
@@ -771,7 +771,7 @@
<para>It appears that only the Windows versions of these
programs support WebDAV. On Mac OS X, the
- <quote>File->Open</quote> dialog box doesn't allow one to type
+ <quote>File->Open</quote> dialog box doesn't allow one to type
a path or URL at all. It's likely that the the WebDAV
features were deliberately left out of Macintosh versions of
these programs, since OS X already provides such excellent
Modified: trunk/src/en/book/ch04.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/en/book/ch04.xml (original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/ch04.xml Tue Jul 5 23:34:06 2005
@@ -516,14 +516,14 @@
--- integer.c (revision 343)
+++ integer.c (revision 344)
@@ -147,7 +147,7 @@
- case 6: sprintf(info->operating_system, "HPFS (OS/2 or NT)"); break;
- case 7: sprintf(info->operating_system, "Macintosh"); break;
- case 8: sprintf(info->operating_system, "Z-System"); break;
-- case 9: sprintf(info->operating_system, "CPM"); break;
-+ case 9: sprintf(info->operating_system, "CP/M"); break;
- case 10: sprintf(info->operating_system, "TOPS-20"); break;
- case 11: sprintf(info->operating_system, "NTFS (Windows NT)"); break;
- case 12: sprintf(info->operating_system, "QDOS"); break;
+ case 6: sprintf(info->operating_system, "HPFS (OS/2 or NT)"); break;
+ case 7: sprintf(info->operating_system, "Macintosh"); break;
+ case 8: sprintf(info->operating_system, "Z-System"); break;
+- case 9: sprintf(info->operating_system, "CPM"); break;
++ case 9: sprintf(info->operating_system, "CP/M"); break;
+ case 10: sprintf(info->operating_system, "TOPS-20"); break;
+ case 11: sprintf(info->operating_system, "NTFS (Windows NT)"); break;
+ case 12: sprintf(info->operating_system, "QDOS"); break;
@@ -164,7 +164,7 @@
low = (unsigned short) read_byte(gzfile); /* read LSB */
high = (unsigned short) read_byte(gzfile); /* read MSB */
@@ -531,19 +531,19 @@
- total = low + high; /* add them togethe for correct total */
+ total = low + high; /* add them together for correct total */
- info->extra_header = (unsigned char *) my_malloc(total);
- fread(info->extra_header, total, 1, gzfile);
+ info->extra_header = (unsigned char *) my_malloc(total);
+ fread(info->extra_header, total, 1, gzfile);
@@ -241,7 +241,7 @@
Store the offset with ftell() ! */
- if ((info->data_offset = ftell(gzfile))== -1) {
+ if ((info->data_offset = ftell(gzfile))== -1) {
- printf("error: ftell() retturned -1.\n");
+ printf("error: ftell() returned -1.\n");
exit(1);
}
@@ -249,7 +249,7 @@
- printf("I believe start of compressed data is %u\n", info->data_offset);
+ printf("I believe start of compressed data is %u\n", info->data_offset);
#endif
- /* Set postion eight bytes from the end of the file. */
Modified: trunk/src/en/book/ch06.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/en/book/ch06.xml (original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/ch06.xml Tue Jul 5 23:34:06 2005
@@ -1951,17 +1951,17 @@
<para>The <command>mod_dav_svn</command> module goes through a
lot of work to make sure that data you've marked
- "unreadable" doesn't get accidentally leaked. This means
- that it needs to closely monitor all of the paths and
- file-contents returned by commands like <command>svn
+ <quote>unreadable</quote> doesn't get accidentally leaked.
+ This means that it needs to closely monitor all of the paths
+ and file-contents returned by commands like <command>svn
checkout</command> or <command>svn update</command>
commands. If these commands encounter a path that isn't
readable according to some authorization policy, then the
path is typically omitted altogether. In the case of
- history or rename tracing — e.g. running a command
- like <command>svn cat -r OLD foo.c</command> on a file that
- was renamed long ago — the rename tracking will simply
- halt if one of the object's former names is determined to be
+ history or rename tracing—e.g. running a command like
+ <command>svn cat -r OLD foo.c</command> on a file that was
+ renamed long ago—the rename tracking will simply halt
+ if one of the object's former names is determined to be
read-restricted.</para>
<para>All of this path-checking can sometimes be quite
@@ -2004,11 +2004,11 @@
</programlisting>
</example>
- <para>The <literal>SVNPathAuthz</literal> directive is "on" by
- default. When set "off", all path-based authorization
- checking is disabled; <command>mod_dav_svn</command> stops
- invoking authorization checks on every path it
- discovers.</para>
+ <para>The <literal>SVNPathAuthz</literal> directive is <quote>on</quote> by
+ default. When set <quote>off</quote>, all path-based
+ authorization checking is disabled;
+ <command>mod_dav_svn</command> stops invoking authorization
+ checks on every path it discovers.</para>
</sect3>
Modified: trunk/src/en/book/ch07.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/en/book/ch07.xml (original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/ch07.xml Tue Jul 5 23:34:06 2005
@@ -1495,9 +1495,9 @@
we didn't ask for it to be.</para>
<para>Note also that we set the <literal>svn:keywords</literal>
- property to "Date Author" yet the keyword anchor used the
- alias <literal>$LastChangedDate$</literal> and still
- expanded correctly.</para>
+ property to <quote>Date Author</quote> yet the keyword
+ anchor used the alias <literal>$LastChangedDate$</literal>
+ and still expanded correctly.</para>
<screen>
Here is the latest report from the front lines.
@@ -3177,7 +3177,7 @@
<command>svn</command> interprets your input. The repository
stores all paths, filenames, and log messages in Unicode,
encoded as UTF-8. In that sense, the repository is
- <firstterm>internationalized</firstterm>— that is, the
+ <firstterm>internationalized</firstterm>—that is, the
repository is ready to accept input in any human language.
This means, however, that the Subversion client is responsible
for sending only UTF-8 filenames and log messages into the
Modified: trunk/src/en/book/ch08.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/en/book/ch08.xml (original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/ch08.xml Tue Jul 5 23:34:06 2005
@@ -406,7 +406,7 @@
printf ("Directory '%s' was successfully added as new revision "
"'%ld'.\n", new_directory, youngest_rev);
}
- else if (err->apr_err == SVN_ERR_FS_CONFLICT)
+ else if (err->apr_err == SVN_ERR_FS_CONFLICT)
{
/* Uh-oh. Our commit failed as the result of a conflict
(someone else seems to have made changes to the same area
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