[svnbook commit] r1433 - trunk/src/en/book

sunny256 svnbook-dev at red-bean.com
Tue Jun 7 06:28:31 CDT 2005


Author: sunny256
Date: Tue Jun  7 06:28:29 2005
New Revision: 1433

Modified:
   trunk/src/en/book/ch02.xml
   trunk/src/en/book/ch05.xml
   trunk/src/en/book/ch06.xml
   trunk/src/en/book/ch09.xml
Log:
Typo fixes in the English book.

* src/en/book/ch02.xml
  (svn.basic.vsn-models.copy-merge.sb-1): Moved period outside 
    parentheses.

* src/en/book/ch05.xml
  (svn.reposadmin.create.hooks): Replace "" with <quote></quote>.
  (svn.reposadmin.maint.tk.svnadmin): Replace "lstxns" with "lslocks" in 
    varlistentry about svnadmin subcommands.

* src/en/book/ch06.xml
  (svn.serverconfig.netmodel.credcache): Replace [...] with … in 
    <screen> example.

* src/en/book/ch09.xml
  (svn.ref.svn.c.add): Replace [...] with … in <screen> example.


Modified: trunk/src/en/book/ch02.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/en/book/ch02.xml	(original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/ch02.xml	Tue Jun  7 06:28:29 2005
@@ -252,7 +252,7 @@
         <para>The copy-modify-merge model is based on the assumption
           that files are contextually mergeable: that is, that the
           majority of the files in the repository are line-based text
-          files (such as program source code.)  But for files with
+          files (such as program source code).  But for files with
           binary formats, such as artwork or sound, it's often
           impossible to merge conflicting changes.  In these
           situations, it really is necessary to users to take strict

Modified: trunk/src/en/book/ch05.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/en/book/ch05.xml	(original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/ch05.xml	Tue Jun  7 06:28:29 2005
@@ -802,13 +802,13 @@
               create a more complex policy specifying exactly which
               users are allowed to lock particular paths.  If the hook
               notices a pre-existing lock, then it can also decide
-              whether a user is allowed to "steal" the existing lock.
-              The repository passes three arguments to the hook: the
-              path to the repository, the path being locked, and the
-              user attempting to perform the lock.  If the program
-              returns a non-zero exit value, the lock action is
-              aborted and anything printed to stderr is marshalled
-              back to the client.</para>
+              whether a user is allowed to <quote>steal</quote> the
+              existing lock.  The repository passes three arguments to
+              the hook: the path to the repository, the path being
+              locked, and the user attempting to perform the lock.  If
+              the program returns a non-zero exit value, the lock
+              action is aborted and anything printed to stderr is
+              marshalled back to the client.</para>
           </listitem>
         </varlistentry>
 
@@ -1350,7 +1350,7 @@
           </varlistentry>
 
           <varlistentry>
-            <term><literal>lstxns</literal></term>
+            <term><literal>lslocks</literal></term>
             <listitem>
               <para>List and describe any locks that exist in the
                 repository.</para>

Modified: trunk/src/en/book/ch06.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/en/book/ch06.xml	(original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/ch06.xml	Tue Jun  7 06:28:29 2005
@@ -255,7 +255,7 @@
 $ svn commit -F new_msg.txt
 Authentication realm: <svn://host.example.com:3690> example realm
 Username:  joe
-[...]
+…
 </screen>
 
       <para>Or, if you want to disable credential caching permanently,

Modified: trunk/src/en/book/ch09.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/en/book/ch09.xml	(original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/ch09.xml	Tue Jun  7 06:28:29 2005
@@ -577,7 +577,7 @@
 A         foo.c
 A         somedir/bar.c
 A         otherdir/docs/baz.doc
-[...]
+…
 </screen>
 
         </refsect1>



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