greg at lorriman.com
Sun Mar 6 04:41:51 CST 2005
In "The Limitations of Mixed Revisions" :
I feel that this section does not have the clarity of the rest of the
page. Particularly I am momentarily confused by both mentions
of "fully up to date". Perhaps a little more context? Its not that it
is badly written, just that unlike the rest of the page it requires
unexpected mental effort (for me) to assimilate.
Would you be interested in other "perfectionist" feedback?
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