[svnbook commit] r1284 - trunk/src/en/book
cmpilato
svnbook-dev at red-bean.com
Sat May 14 12:42:54 CDT 2005
Author: cmpilato
Date: Sat May 14 12:42:53 2005
New Revision: 1284
Modified:
trunk/src/en/book/ch07.xml
Log:
Minor corrections, spurred by Ben.
Modified: trunk/src/en/book/ch07.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/en/book/ch07.xml (original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/ch07.xml Sat May 14 12:42:53 2005
@@ -1797,12 +1797,9 @@
project's new name, so <filename>concept</filename> is renamed
to <filename>frabnaggilywort</filename>. Life goes on,
Frabnaggilywort releases a 1.0 version, and is downloaded and
- used daily by teems of people aiming to improve their
+ used daily by hordes of people aiming to improve their
lives.</para>
- <!-- "teem" is only a verb, so cmike: please change to 'hordes'
- or something... -->
-
<para>It's a nice story, really, but it doesn't end there.
Entrepreneur that you are, you've already got another think in
the tank. So you make a new directory,
@@ -1835,9 +1832,9 @@
revision is all that is needed to refer to a specific line of
history. Peg revisions are specified to the Subversion
command-line client using <firstterm>at syntax</firstterm>, so
- called because the syntax involves appending an <quote>at
- sign</quote> at the peg revision to the end of the path with
- which the revision is associated.</para>
+ called because the syntax involves appending an ampersand (or
+ <quote>at sign</quote>) at the peg revision to the end of the
+ path with which the revision is associated.</para>
<para>But what of the <option>--revision (-r)</option> of which
we've spoken so much in this book? That revision (or set of
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