[svnbook commit] r2847 - trunk/src/en/book
fitz
noreply at red-bean.com
Mon Aug 13 22:20:25 CDT 2007
Author: fitz
Date: Mon Aug 13 22:20:24 2007
New Revision: 2847
Log:
Fixes suggested by cmike.
* src/en/book/ch09-reference.xml: Tweak.
Modified:
trunk/src/en/book/ch09-reference.xml
Modified: trunk/src/en/book/ch09-reference.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/en/book/ch09-reference.xml (original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/ch09-reference.xml Mon Aug 13 22:20:24 2007
@@ -147,8 +147,8 @@
</term>
<listitem>
<para>Uses the contents of the named file for the
- specified subcommand, however, different subcommands do
- different things with this content—for example,
+ specified subcommand, though different subcommands do
+ different things with this content. For example,
<command>svn commit</command> uses the content as a
commit log, whereas <command>svn propset</command> uses
it as a property value.</para>
@@ -1950,11 +1950,10 @@
Committed revision 16.
</screen>
- <para>Be aware that this will <emphasis>not</emphasis>
- create a directory named <filename>myproj</filename> in
- the repository. If that's what you want, simply add
- <filename>myproj</filename> to the end of the
- URL:</para>
+ <para>Be aware that this will <emphasis>not</emphasis>
+ create a directory named <filename>myproj</filename> in
+ the repository. If that's what you want, simply add
+ <filename>myproj</filename> to the end of the URL:</para>
<screen>
$ svn import -m "New import" myproj http://svn.red-bean.com/repos/trunk/misc/myproj
@@ -5351,7 +5350,9 @@
command fails, that means that your repository has at
least one corrupted revision and you should restore the
corrupted revision from a backup (you did make a backup,
- didn't you?).</para> </refsect1>
+ didn't you?).</para>
+
+ </refsect1>
<refsect1>
<title>Examples</title>
@@ -6380,9 +6381,9 @@
<term><option>--listen-port</option>=<replaceable>PORT</replaceable></term>
<listitem>
<para>Causes svnserve to listen on
- <replaceable>PORT</replaceable> when run in daemon mode
+ <replaceable>PORT</replaceable> when run in daemon mode.
(FreeBSD daemons only listen on tcp6 by default—this
- option tells them to also listen on tcp4).</para>
+ option tells them to also listen on tcp4.)</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
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