[svnbook commit] r2836 - trunk/src/en/book
C. Michael Pilato
cmpilato at red-bean.com
Sun Aug 12 21:05:14 CDT 2007
Quicky fly-by review, just some stuff that catches my eye:
sussman wrote:
> Author: sussman
> Date: Sun Aug 12 20:30:22 2007
> New Revision: 2836
> Modified: trunk/src/en/book/appc-webdav.xml
> ==============================================================================
> --- trunk/src/en/book/appc-webdav.xml (original)
> +++ trunk/src/en/book/appc-webdav.xml Sun Aug 12 20:30:22 2007
> @@ -47,7 +47,7 @@
> <para>The original WebDAV standard has been widely successful.
> Every modern computer operating system has a general WebDAV
> client built-in (details to follow), and a number of popular
> - standalone applications are also able to speak WebDAV —
> + standalone applications are also able to speak WebDAV—
No good -- you've got — "connected" on only one side. There
should be no space on *either* side.
> @@ -367,10 +368,9 @@
> <sect2 id="svn.webdav.clients.standalone">
> <title>Standalone WebDAV applications</title>
>
> - <para>A WebDAV application is a program which contains built-in
> - functionality for speaking WebDAV protocols with a WebDAV
> - server. We'll cover some of the most popular programs with
> - this kind of WebDAV support.</para>
> + <para>A WebDAV application is a program which speakes WebDAV
"speakes" ?
> + was just another directory on the local computer, and to
> + perform basic tree editing operations on the items in that
> + share. For example, Windows Explorer is able to browse a
> + WebDAV server as a <quote>network place</quote>. Users can
> + drag files to and from the desktop, or can rename, copy, or
> + delete files in the usual way. But because it's only a
> + feature of the file-explorer, the DAV share isn't visible to
> + ordinary applications. All DAV interaction must happen
> + through the explorer interface.</para>
I don't think "file explorer" needs to be hyphenated.
--
C. Michael Pilato <cmpilato at red-bean.com>
"The Christian ideal has not been tried and found wanting. It has
been found difficult; and left untried." -- G. K. Chesterton
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