[svnbook commit] r2836 - trunk/src/en/book

C. Michael Pilato cmpilato at red-bean.com
Sun Aug 12 21:05:14 CDT 2007


Quicky fly-by review, just some stuff that catches my eye:

sussman wrote:
> Author: sussman
> Date: Sun Aug 12 20:30:22 2007
> New Revision: 2836

> Modified: trunk/src/en/book/appc-webdav.xml
> ==============================================================================
> --- trunk/src/en/book/appc-webdav.xml	(original)
> +++ trunk/src/en/book/appc-webdav.xml	Sun Aug 12 20:30:22 2007
> @@ -47,7 +47,7 @@
>      <para>The original WebDAV standard has been widely successful.
>        Every modern computer operating system has a general WebDAV
>        client built-in (details to follow), and a number of popular
> -      standalone applications are also able to speak WebDAV —
> +      standalone applications are also able to speak WebDAV—

No good -- you've got — "connected" on only one side.  There
should be no space on *either* side.

> @@ -367,10 +368,9 @@
>      <sect2 id="svn.webdav.clients.standalone">
>        <title>Standalone WebDAV applications</title>
>  
> -      <para>A WebDAV application is a program which contains built-in
> -        functionality for speaking WebDAV protocols with a WebDAV
> -        server.  We'll cover some of the most popular programs with
> -        this kind of WebDAV support.</para>
> +      <para>A WebDAV application is a program which speakes WebDAV

"speakes" ?

> +        was just another directory on the local computer, and to
> +        perform basic tree editing operations on the items in that
> +        share.  For example, Windows Explorer is able to browse a
> +        WebDAV server as a <quote>network place</quote>.  Users can
> +        drag files to and from the desktop, or can rename, copy, or
> +        delete files in the usual way.  But because it's only a
> +        feature of the file-explorer, the DAV share isn't visible to
> +        ordinary applications.  All DAV interaction must happen
> +        through the explorer interface.</para>

I don't think "file explorer" needs to be hyphenated.


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C. Michael Pilato <cmpilato at red-bean.com>

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