[svnbook commit] r2840 - trunk/src/en/book

[C. Michael Pilato]

fitz wrote:
> Author: fitz
> Date: Sun Aug 12 21:33:49 2007
> New Revision: 2840
> 
> Log:
> Fix Bug #71.
> 
> * src/en/book/ch02-basic-usage.xml: Add warning about svn ls default.
> 
> 
> Modified:
>    trunk/src/en/book/ch02-basic-usage.xml
> 
> Modified: trunk/src/en/book/ch02-basic-usage.xml
> ==============================================================================
> --- trunk/src/en/book/ch02-basic-usage.xml	(original)
> +++ trunk/src/en/book/ch02-basic-usage.xml	Sun Aug 12 21:33:49 2007
> @@ -1791,6 +1791,16 @@
>            if it is a file, the date it was last modified, and the item's
>            name.</para>
>  
> +        <warning>
> +          <para>The <command>svn list</command> with no arguments

"The <command>svn list</command> *command* with no arguments..."

It is *so easy* to read that markup </command> as part of the visible text,
isn't it?  :-)

> +          defaults to the <emphasis>repository URL</emphasis> of the
> +          current working directory, <emphasis>not</emphasis> the
> +          local working copy directory.

There's some ambiguous grammar here.  I think it's easy to clear up with
this small tweak:

   ... *not* to the local working copy directory itself.
             ^^                                  ^^^^^^

-- 
C. Michael Pilato <cmpilato at red-bean.com>

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