[svnbook commit] r3247 - trunk/src/en/book

cmpilato noreply at red-bean.com
Wed Aug 6 03:58:40 CDT 2008


Author: cmpilato
Date: Wed Aug  6 03:58:39 2008
New Revision: 3247

Log:
* src/en/book/ch09-reference.xml
* src/en/book/appb-svn-for-cvs-users.xml
* src/en/book/ch05-repository-admin.xml
* src/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml
  Consistify!  Refer to 'dump file' or 'dump stream', not 'dumpfile'
  or 'dumpstream'.  And wrap instances of stdin, stdout, and stderr
  with <filename> tags (instead of a mix of filename, literal, and
  emphasis tags).



Modified:
   trunk/src/en/book/appb-svn-for-cvs-users.xml
   trunk/src/en/book/ch05-repository-admin.xml
   trunk/src/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml
   trunk/src/en/book/ch09-reference.xml

Modified: trunk/src/en/book/appb-svn-for-cvs-users.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/en/book/appb-svn-for-cvs-users.xml	(original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/appb-svn-for-cvs-users.xml	Wed Aug  6 03:58:39 2008
@@ -553,7 +553,7 @@
       it scans your CVS repository multiple times and attempts to
       deduce commits, branches, and tags as best it can.  When it
       finishes, the result is either a Subversion repository or a
-      portable Subversion dumpfile representing your code's history.
+      portable Subversion dump file representing your code's history.
       See the web site for detailed instructions and caveats.</para>
 
   </sect1>

Modified: trunk/src/en/book/ch05-repository-admin.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/en/book/ch05-repository-admin.xml	(original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/ch05-repository-admin.xml	Wed Aug  6 03:58:39 2008
@@ -1799,7 +1799,7 @@
 
       <para>Subversion provides such functionality by way of
         <firstterm>repository dump streams</firstterm>.  A repository
-        dump stream (often referred to as a <quote>dumpfile</quote>
+        dump stream (often referred to as a <quote>dump file</quote>
         when stored as a file on disk) is a portable, flat file format
         that describes the various revisions in your
         repository—what was changed, by whom, when, and so on.

Modified: trunk/src/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml	(original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml	Wed Aug  6 03:58:39 2008
@@ -543,8 +543,8 @@
 
       <para>When invoked with the <option>--inetd</option> option,
         <command>svnserve</command> attempts to speak with a
-        Subversion client via <emphasis>stdin</emphasis> and
-        <emphasis>stdout</emphasis> using a custom protocol.  This is
+        Subversion client via <filename>stdin</filename> and
+        <filename>stdout</filename> using a custom protocol.  This is
         the standard behavior for a program being run via
         <command>inetd</command>.  The IANA has reserved port 3690 for
         the Subversion protocol, so on a Unix-like system you can add
@@ -591,7 +591,7 @@
           the command line; instead, the SSH daemon
           does so for you.)  The <command>svnserve</command> program
           behaves normally (communicating via
-          <emphasis>stdin</emphasis> and <emphasis>stdout</emphasis>)
+          <filename>stdin</filename> and <filename>stdout</filename>)
           and assumes that the traffic is being automatically
           redirected over some sort of tunnel back to the client.
           When <command>svnserve</command> is invoked by a tunnel

Modified: trunk/src/en/book/ch09-reference.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/en/book/ch09-reference.xml	(original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/ch09-reference.xml	Wed Aug  6 03:58:39 2008
@@ -5677,7 +5677,7 @@
 
         <refnamediv>
           <refname>svnadmin dump</refname>
-          <refpurpose>Dump the contents of the filesystem to <literal>stdout</literal>.</refpurpose>
+          <refpurpose>Dump the contents of the filesystem to <filename>stdout</filename>.</refpurpose>
         </refnamediv>
         <refsect1>
           <title>Synopsis</title>
@@ -5686,9 +5686,9 @@
         <refsect1>
           <title>Description</title>
 
-          <para>Dump the contents of the filesystem to <literal>stdout</literal> in a
-            <quote>dumpfile</quote> portable format, sending feedback
-            to <literal>stderr</literal>.  Dump revisions
+          <para>Dump the contents of the filesystem to <filename>stdout</filename> in a
+            <quote>dump file</quote> portable format, sending feedback
+            to <filename>stderr</filename>.  Dump revisions
             <replaceable>LOWER</replaceable> rev through
             <replaceable>UPPER</replaceable> rev.  If no revisions are
             given, dump all revision trees.  If only
@@ -5696,7 +5696,7 @@
             revision tree.  See <xref linkend="svn.reposadmin.maint.migrate"/>
             for a practical use.</para>
 
-          <para>By default, the Subversion dumpfile stream contains a
+          <para>By default, the Subversion dump stream contains a
             single revision (the first revision in the requested
             revision range) in which every file and directory in the
             repository in that revision is presented as though that whole
@@ -5705,18 +5705,18 @@
             contain only the files and directories that were modified
             in those revisions.  For a modified file, the complete
             full-text representation of its contents, as well as all of
-            its properties, are presented in the dumpfile; for a
+            its properties, are presented in the dump file; for a
             directory, all of its properties are presented.</para>
 
-          <para>Two useful options modify the dumpfile
+          <para>Two useful options modify the dump file
             generator's behavior.  The first is the
             <option>--incremental</option> option, which simply causes
-            that first revision in the dumpfile stream to contain only
+            that first revision in the dump stream to contain only
             the files and directories modified in that revision,
             instead of being presented as the addition of a new tree,
             and in exactly the same way that every other revision in
-            the dumpfile is presented.  This is useful for generating
-            a relatively small dumpfile to be loaded into another
+            the dump file is presented.  This is useful for generating
+            a relatively small dump file to be loaded into another
             repository that already has the files and directories
             that exist in the original repository.</para>
 
@@ -5725,10 +5725,10 @@
             instead of emitting full-text representations of file
             contents and property lists, emit only deltas of those
             items against their previous versions.  This reduces (in
-            some cases, drastically) the size of the dumpfile that
+            some cases, drastically) the size of the dump file that
             <command>svnadmin dump</command> creates.  There are, however,
             disadvantages to using this option—deltified
-            dumpfiles are more CPU-intensive to create, cannot be
+            dump files are more CPU-intensive to create, cannot be
             operated on by <command>svndumpfilter</command>, and tend
             not to compress as well as their nondeltified counterparts
             when using third-party tools such as <command>gzip</command>
@@ -5944,8 +5944,8 @@
 
         <refnamediv>
           <refname>svnadmin load</refname> <refpurpose>Read a
-            <quote>dumpfile</quote>-formatted stream from
-            <literal>stdin</literal>.</refpurpose>
+            repository dump stream from
+            <filename>stdin</filename>.</refpurpose>
         </refnamediv>
         <refsect1>
           <title>Synopsis</title>
@@ -5954,9 +5954,9 @@
         <refsect1>
           <title>Description</title>
 
-          <para>Read a <quote>dumpfile</quote>-formatted stream from
-            <literal>stdin</literal>, committing new revisions into the repository's
-            filesystem.  Send progress feedback to <literal>stdout</literal>.</para>
+          <para>Read a repository dump stream from
+            <filename>stdin</filename>, committing new revisions into the repository's
+            filesystem.  Send progress feedback to <filename>stdout</filename>.</para>
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
@@ -8073,7 +8073,7 @@
           <term><option>--inetd</option> (<option>-i</option>)</term>
           <listitem>
             <para>Causes <command>svnserve</command> to use the
-              <literal>stdin</literal>/<literal>stdout</literal> file descriptors, as is appropriate for a
+              <filename>stdin</filename> and <filename>stdout</filename> file descriptors, as is appropriate for a
               daemon running out of <command>inetd</command>.</para>
           </listitem>
         </varlistentry>
@@ -8153,7 +8153,7 @@
             <para>Causes <command>svnserve</command> to run in tunnel
               mode, which is just like the <command>inetd</command>
               mode of operation (both modes serve one connection over
-              <literal>stdin</literal>/<literal>stdout</literal>, and then exit), except that the connection
+              <filename>stdin</filename>/<filename>stdout</filename>, and then exit), except that the connection
               is considered to be preauthenticated with the username
               of the current UID.  This flag is automatically passed
               for you by the client when running over a tunnel agent
@@ -8202,7 +8202,7 @@
     <title>svndumpfilter</title>
     
     <para><command>svndumpfilter</command> is a command-line utility
-      for removing history from a Subversion dumpfile by either
+      for removing history from a Subversion dump file by either
       excluding or including paths beginning with one or more named
       prefixes.  For details, see
       <xref linkend="svn.reposadmin.maint.tk.svndumpfilter"/>.</para>
@@ -8222,7 +8222,7 @@
           <listitem>
             <para>If filtering causes any revision to be empty (i.e.,
               causes no change to the repository), removes these
-              revisions from the final dumpfile.</para>
+              revisions from the final dump file.</para>
           </listitem>
         </varlistentry>
 
@@ -8287,7 +8287,7 @@
 
         <refnamediv>
           <refname>svndumpfilter exclude</refname>
-          <refpurpose>Filter out nodes with given prefixes from the dumpstream.</refpurpose>
+          <refpurpose>Filter out nodes with given prefixes from the dump stream.</refpurpose>
         </refnamediv>
         <refsect1>
           <title>Synopsis</title>
@@ -8298,7 +8298,7 @@
 
           <para>This can be used to exclude nodes that begin with one or
             more <replaceable>PATH_PREFIX</replaceable>es from a
-            filtered dumpfile.</para>
+            filtered dump file.</para>
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
@@ -8316,7 +8316,7 @@
         <refsect1>
           <title>Examples</title>
 
-        <para>If we have a dumpfile from a repository with a number of
+        <para>If we have a dump file from a repository with a number of
           different picnic-related directories in it, but we want to keep
           everything <emphasis>except</emphasis>
           the <filename>sandwiches</filename> part of the repository,
@@ -8351,7 +8351,7 @@
         <refnamediv>
           <refname>svndumpfilter include</refname>
           <refpurpose>Filter out nodes without given prefixes from
-            dumpstream.</refpurpose>
+            dump stream.</refpurpose>
         </refnamediv>
         <refsect1>
           <title>Synopsis</title>
@@ -8362,7 +8362,7 @@
 
           <para>Can be used to include nodes that begin with one or
             more <replaceable>PATH_PREFIX</replaceable>es in a
-            filtered dumpfile (thus excluding all other paths).</para>
+            filtered dump file (thus excluding all other paths).</para>
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
@@ -8380,7 +8380,7 @@
         <refsect1>
           <title>Example</title>
 
-        <para>If we have a dumpfile from a repository with a number of
+        <para>If we have a dump file from a repository with a number of
           different picnic-related directories in it, but only want to
           keep only the <filename>sandwiches</filename> part of the
           repository, we'll include only that path:</para>
@@ -9355,7 +9355,7 @@
           nonzero exit status, the commit <emphasis>will
           not</emphasis> be aborted since it has already
           completed.  However, anything that the hook printed
-          to <literal>stderr</literal> will be marshalled back to the
+          to <filename>stderr</filename> will be marshalled back to the
           client, making it easier to diagnose hook failures.</para>
               
       </refsect1>
@@ -9412,7 +9412,7 @@
         <para>If the <literal>pre-revprop-change</literal> hook
           doesn't exist, isn't executable, or returns a nonzero exit
           value, no change to the property will be made, and anything
-          printed to <literal>stderr</literal> is marshalled back to the client.</para>
+          printed to <filename>stderr</filename> is marshalled back to the client.</para>
 
       </refsect1>
 
@@ -9487,7 +9487,7 @@
           nonzero exit status, the change <emphasis>will
           not</emphasis> be aborted since it has already
           completed.  However, anything that the hook printed
-          to <literal>stderr</literal> will be marshalled back to the
+          to <filename>stderr</filename> will be marshalled back to the
           client, making it easier to diagnose hook failures.</para>
 
       </refsect1>
@@ -9557,7 +9557,7 @@
 
         <para>If the <literal>pre-lock</literal> hook program returns
           a nonzero exit value, the lock action is aborted and
-          anything printed to <literal>stderr</literal> is marshalled back to the
+          anything printed to <filename>stderr</filename> is marshalled back to the
           client.</para>
 
       </refsect1>
@@ -9614,7 +9614,7 @@
           nonzero exit status, the lock <emphasis>will
           not</emphasis> be aborted since it has already
           completed.  However, anything that the hook printed
-          to <literal>stderr</literal> will be marshalled back to the
+          to <filename>stderr</filename> will be marshalled back to the
           client, making it easier to diagnose hook failures.</para>
 
       </refsect1>
@@ -9675,7 +9675,7 @@
 
         <para>If the <literal>pre-unlock</literal> hook program
           returns a nonzero exit value, the unlock action is aborted
-          and anything printed to <literal>stderr</literal> is marshalled back to the
+          and anything printed to <filename>stderr</filename> is marshalled back to the
           client.</para>
 
       </refsect1>
@@ -9732,7 +9732,7 @@
           nonzero exit status, the unlock <emphasis>will
           not</emphasis> be aborted since it has already
           completed.  However, anything that the hook printed
-          to <literal>stderr</literal> will be marshalled back to the
+          to <filename>stderr</filename> will be marshalled back to the
           client, making it easier to diagnose hook failures.</para>
 
       </refsect1>




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