[svnbook commit] r3280 - trunk/src/de/book

jmfelderhoff noreply at red-bean.com
Sun Aug 24 08:05:27 CDT 2008


Author: jmfelderhoff
Date: Sun Aug 24 08:05:26 2008
New Revision: 3280

Log:
* foreword.xml
  ch00-preface.xml
  ch01-fundamental-concepts.xml
  ch02-basic-usage.xml
  - align English text (in comments) with original in ../../en/book.


Modified:
   trunk/src/de/book/ch00-preface.xml
   trunk/src/de/book/ch01-fundamental-concepts.xml
   trunk/src/de/book/ch02-basic-usage.xml
   trunk/src/de/book/foreword.xml

Modified: trunk/src/de/book/ch00-preface.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/de/book/ch00-preface.xml	(original)
+++ trunk/src/de/book/ch00-preface.xml	Sun Aug 24 08:05:26 2008
@@ -406,7 +406,7 @@
     
 <!--
     <para>The following typographic conventions are used in this
-      book</para>:
+      book:</para>
 -->
     <para>Die folgenden typografischen Konventionen werden in diesem
       Buch verwendet:</para>
@@ -814,7 +814,7 @@
       links to the latest releases and tagged versions of the book in
       various formats, as well as instructions for accessing the
       book's Subversion repository (where its DocBook XML source
-      code lives).  Feedback is welcome—encouraged, even.  Please
+      code lives).  Feedback is welcomed—encouraged, even.  Please
       submit all comments, complaints, and patches against the book
       sources to <email>svnbook-dev at red-bean.com</email>.</para>
 -->
@@ -1293,8 +1293,6 @@
 -->
       <title>Von Brian W. Fitzpatrick</title>
 
-      <!-- ### TODO(fitz):  update this? -->
-
 <!--
       <para>Huge thanks to my wife Marie for being incredibly
         understanding, supportive, and most of all, patient.  Thank
@@ -1982,7 +1980,7 @@
           <listitem>
 <!--
             <para>Release 1.1 introduced FSFS, a flat-file repository
-              storage option for the repository.  While the BerkeleyDB
+              storage option for the repository.  While the Berkeley DB
               backend is still widely used and supported, FSFS has
               since become the default choice for
               newly created repositories due to its low barrier to
@@ -2013,18 +2011,17 @@
           <listitem>
 <!--
             <para>Release 1.2 introduced the ability to create
-              server-side <quote>locks</quote> on files, thus
-              serializing commit access to certain resources.  While
-              Subversion is still a fundamentally concurrent version
-              control system, certain types of binary files (e.g. art
-              assets) cannot be merged together.  The
-              locking feature fulfills the need to version and protect
-              such resources.  With locking also came a
-              complete <quote>auto-versioning</quote> implementation,
-              allowing Subversion repositories to be mounted as
-              network folders.  Finally, Subversion 1.2 began using a
-              new, faster binary-differencing algorithm to compress
-              and retrieve old versions of files.</para>
+              server-side locks on files, thus serializing commit
+              access to certain resources.  While Subversion is still
+              a fundamentally concurrent version control system,
+              certain types of binary files (e.g. art assets)
+              cannot be merged together.  The locking feature fulfills
+              the need to version and protect such resources.  With
+              locking also came a complete WebDAV auto-versioning
+              implementation, allowing Subversion repositories to be
+              mounted as network folders.  Finally, Subversion 1.2
+              began using a new, faster binary-differencing algorithm
+              to compress and retrieve old versions of files.</para>
 -->
             <para>Mit Release 1.2 konnten serverseitige Sperren auf
               Dateien erzeugt und somit der Commit-Zugriff für
@@ -2077,11 +2074,11 @@
             <para>Release 1.4 introduced a whole new
               tool—<command>svnsync</command>— for doing
               one-way repository replication over a network.  Major
-              parts of the working copy metadata were revamped to
+              parts of the working copy metadata were revamped to no
               longer use XML (resulting in client-side speed gains),
               while the BerkeleyDB repository backend gained the
-              ability to automatically <quote>recover</quote> itself
-              after a server crash.</para>
+              ability to automatically recover itself after a server
+              crash.</para>
 -->
             <para>Release 1.4 führte ein völlig neues
               Werkzeug – <command>svnsync</command> –  ein, um

Modified: trunk/src/de/book/ch01-fundamental-concepts.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/de/book/ch01-fundamental-concepts.xml	(original)
+++ trunk/src/de/book/ch01-fundamental-concepts.xml	Sun Aug 24 08:05:26 2008
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@
       makes the information available to others; by reading data, the
       client receives information from others.  <xref
       linkend="svn.basic.repository.dia-1"/> illustrates this.</para> -->
-	<para>Subversion ist ein zentralisiertes System zur gemeinsamen
+    <para>Subversion ist ein zentralisiertes System zur gemeinsamen
       Nutzung von Informationen. In seinem Kern ist ein Repository ein
       zentraler Speicher von Daten. Das Repository speichert Informationen
       in Form eines <firstterm>Dateisystembaumes</firstterm>, typischerweise
@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@
       to it—every change to every file, and even changes to the
       directory tree itself, such as the addition, deletion, and
       rearrangement of files and directories.</para> -->
-	<para>So, warum ist das interessant? Bis zu diesem Punkt hört sich
+    <para>So, warum ist das interessant? Bis zu diesem Punkt hört sich
       das wie die Definition eines typischen File-Servers an. Und
       tatsächlich, das Repository <emphasis>ist</emphasis> eine Art von
       File-Server, aber nicht von der Art, die Sie kennen.  Was das
@@ -396,6 +396,9 @@
 
     <!-- =============================================================== -->
     <sect2 id="svn.advanced.reposurls">
+<!--
+      <title>Subversion Repository URLs</title>
+-->
       <title>Subversion-Repository-URLs</title>
 
 <!--
@@ -1348,7 +1351,7 @@
           because you're ready to submit new changes to the repository
           doesn't mean you're ready to receive changes from other
           people.  And if you have new changes still in progress,
-          then <command>svn update</command> should gracefully merge
+          <command>svn update</command> should gracefully merge
           repository changes into your own, rather than forcing you to
           publish them.</para>
 -->
@@ -1430,7 +1433,6 @@
 
       </sect3>
 
-      <!-- TODO(jmf) continue here -->
       <!-- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -->
       <sect3 id="svn.basic.in-action.mixedrevs.normal">
 <!--

Modified: trunk/src/de/book/ch02-basic-usage.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/de/book/ch02-basic-usage.xml	(original)
+++ trunk/src/de/book/ch02-basic-usage.xml	Sun Aug 24 08:05:26 2008
@@ -437,8 +437,8 @@
 <!--
     <para>Since Subversion uses a copy-modify-merge
       model instead of lock-modify-unlock (see
-      <xref linkend="svn.basic.vsn-models"/>), you can start right in
-      making changes to the files and directories in your working
+      <xref linkend="svn.basic.vsn-models"/>), you can immediately
+      make changes to the files and directories in your working
       copy.  Your working copy is just like any other collection of
       files and directories on your system.  You can edit and change
       it, move it around, even delete the entire working copy and
@@ -1617,8 +1617,8 @@
 $ svn diff
 Index: bar.c
 ===================================================================
---- bar.c	(revision 3)
-+++ bar.c	(working copy)
+--- bar.c   (revision 3)
++++ bar.c   (working copy)
 @@ -1,7 +1,12 @@
 +#include <sys/types.h>
 +#include <sys/stat.h>
@@ -1634,22 +1634,22 @@
 
 Index: README
 ===================================================================
---- README	(revision 3)
-+++ README	(working copy)
+--- README  (revision 3)
++++ README  (working copy)
 @@ -193,3 +193,4 @@
 +Note to self:  pick up laundry.
 
 Index: stuff/fish.c
 ===================================================================
---- stuff/fish.c	(revision 1)
-+++ stuff/fish.c	(working copy)
+--- stuff/fish.c    (revision 1)
++++ stuff/fish.c    (working copy)
 -Welcome to the file known as 'fish'.
 -Information on fish will be here soon.
 
 Index: stuff/things/bloo.h
 ===================================================================
---- stuff/things/bloo.h	(revision 8)
-+++ stuff/things/bloo.h	(working copy)
+--- stuff/things/bloo.h (revision 8)
++++ stuff/things/bloo.h (working copy)
 +Here is a new file to describe
 +things about bloo.
 </screen>
@@ -2089,9 +2089,9 @@
           (<userinput>d</userinput>) is what you'll use for this:</para>
 -->
         <para>Bevor Sie entscheiden, wie Sie einen Konflikt beseitigen
-	  wollen, wollen Sie wahrscheinlich genau sehen, worin der
-	  Konflikt besteht, und benutzen hierfür den Befehl
-	  <firstterm>diff</firstterm> (<userinput>d</userinput>):</para>
+          wollen, wollen Sie wahrscheinlich genau sehen, worin der
+         Konflikt besteht, und benutzen hierfür den Befehl
+         <firstterm>diff</firstterm> (<userinput>d</userinput>):</para>
 
         <screen>
 …
@@ -2771,7 +2771,7 @@
       <!-- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -->
       <sect3 id="svn.tour.cycle.resolve.revert">
 <!--
-        <title>Punting: using svn revert</title>
+        <title>Punting: Using svn revert</title>
 -->
         <title>Die Verwendung von svn revert</title>
 
@@ -3213,8 +3213,8 @@
 $ svn diff
 Index: rules.txt
 ===================================================================
---- rules.txt	(revision 3)
-+++ rules.txt	(working copy)
+--- rules.txt   (revision 3)
++++ rules.txt   (working copy)
 @@ -1,4 +1,5 @@
  Be kind to others
  Freedom = Responsibility
@@ -3240,8 +3240,8 @@
 $ svn diff -r 3 rules.txt
 Index: rules.txt
 ===================================================================
---- rules.txt	(revision 3)
-+++ rules.txt	(working copy)
+--- rules.txt   (revision 3)
++++ rules.txt   (working copy)
 @@ -1,4 +1,5 @@
  Be kind to others
  Freedom = Responsibility
@@ -3267,8 +3267,8 @@
 $ svn diff -r 2:3 rules.txt
 Index: rules.txt
 ===================================================================
---- rules.txt	(revision 2)
-+++ rules.txt	(revision 3)
+--- rules.txt   (revision 2)
++++ rules.txt   (revision 3)
 @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
  Be kind to others
 -Freedom = Chocolate Ice Cream
@@ -3286,8 +3286,8 @@
 $ svn diff -c 3 rules.txt
 Index: rules.txt
 ===================================================================
---- rules.txt	(revision 2)
-+++ rules.txt	(revision 3)
+--- rules.txt   (revision 2)
++++ rules.txt   (revision 3)
 @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
  Be kind to others
 -Freedom = Chocolate Ice Cream

Modified: trunk/src/de/book/foreword.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/de/book/foreword.xml	(original)
+++ trunk/src/de/book/foreword.xml	Sun Aug 24 08:05:26 2008
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@
 vom Autor geschrieben und bietet Informationen, die für das
 Verständnis wichtig sind. -->
 
-<preface id="svn-foreword">
+<preface id="svn.foreword">
 
   <prefaceinfo>
     <author>




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