Typos in 'Version Control With Subversion'
Steve Eppley
SEppley at alumni.caltech.edu
Sat Nov 27 02:45:45 CST 2010
Hi,
I noticed some grammatical errors/typos in
"Version Control With Subversion." (The
nightly build downloaded on November 26, 2010.)
"What makes the repository special is
that these as the files in the repository
are changed"
-- The word "these" doesn't belong.
"A version control system's value comes
in the fact"
-- Should be "A version control
system's value comes from the fact."
"its via working copies"
-- Missing apostrophe; should be "it's
via working copies."
If I spot any more errors as I continue
reading, I'll let you know.
An omission? In the section How To Read This
Book, unmentioned is the unlucky reader who
needs to install and administer a Subversion
server but doesn't yet have any such
experience. (In other words, people like
me.) The only inexperienced readers listed
are those lucky enough to have someone else
install and administer the server.
Regards and best wishes,
Steve Eppley
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