[svnbook] r4037 committed - Followup to r4036 with some wording tweaks.

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Revision: 4037
Author:   cmpilato at gmail.com
Date:     Fri Aug 26 08:14:22 2011
Log:      Followup to r4036 with some wording tweaks.
http://code.google.com/p/svnbook/source/detail?r=4037

Modified:
  /trunk/en/book/ch05-repository-admin.xml
  /trunk/en/book/ch09-reference.xml

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--- /trunk/en/book/ch05-repository-admin.xml	Fri Aug 26 08:11:50 2011
+++ /trunk/en/book/ch05-repository-admin.xml	Fri Aug 26 08:14:22 2011
@@ -825,12 +825,11 @@
        </informalexample>

        <para>After running this simple command, you have a Subversion
-        repository.  Depending on how users will access this
-        repository, you might need to fiddle with the filesystem
-        permissions of your new repository.  But since basic system
-        administration is rather outside the scope of this text, we'll
-        leave further exploration of that topic as an exercise to the
-        reader.</para>
+        repository.  Depending on how users will access this new
+        repository, you might need to fiddle with its filesystem
+        permissions.  But since basic system administration is rather
+        outside the scope of this text, we'll leave further
+        exploration of that topic as an exercise to the reader.</para>

        <tip>
          <para>The path argument to <command>svnadmin</command> is just
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--- /trunk/en/book/ch09-reference.xml	Fri Aug 26 08:11:50 2011
+++ /trunk/en/book/ch09-reference.xml	Fri Aug 26 08:14:22 2011
@@ -5886,7 +5886,7 @@
                <filename>/var/svn/subdirectory/repos</filename> will
                fail with an error.  Also, keep in mind that, depending
                on where on your system you are creating your
-              repository, you might need to run the <command>svnadmin
+              repository, you might need to run <command>svnadmin
                create</command> as a user with elevated privileges
                (such as the <literal>root</literal> user).</para>





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