[PATCH] Chapter 1 - "change subtly"
Richard Cavell
richardcavell at mail.com
Wed Sep 28 22:30:06 CDT 2011
Hi,
This is possibly really pedantic, but the use of "change" as an intransitive verb here annoys me, because it is the user who changes the URLs.
Richard
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--- ch01-fundamental-concepts.xml (revision 4096)
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the <literal>http://</literal> variety. Because Subversion
offers several different ways for its clients to communicate
with its servers, the URLs used to address the repository
- change subtly depending on which repository access mechanism
+ differ subtly depending on which repository access mechanism
is employed. <xref linkend="svn.basic.in-action.wc.tbl-1"/>
describes how different URL schemes map to the available
repository access methods. For more details about
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