[svnbook] r5125 committed - trunk/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml

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Revision: 5125
          http://sourceforge.net/p/svnbook/source/5125
Author:   lyalyakin
Date:     2016-03-11 11:46:47 +0000 (Fri, 11 Mar 2016)
Log Message:
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* en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml
  svn.serverconfig.httpd.authz.inrepo-authz
  svn.serverconfig.httpd.ref.mod_authz_svn
  Fixing grammar mistakes.

 

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    trunk/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml

Modified: trunk/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml
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--- trunk/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml	2016-03-11 10:13:39 UTC (rev 5124)
+++ trunk/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml	2016-03-11 11:46:47 UTC (rev 5125)
@@ -2847,18 +2847,16 @@
           authorization file in the same repository to which the
           access rules are being applied or another repository.  This
           approach enables versioning features of Subversion for
-          the path-based authorization.</para>
+          the path-based authorization configuration.</para>
 
         <para>Both <literal>AuthzSVNAccessFile</literal> and
           <literal>AuthzSVNReposRelativeAccessFile</literal> configuration
-          directives allow to specify in repo authorization file's location.
-          Absolute and repository relative URLs (one which begins with ^/)
-          via local <literal>file://</literal> access method are supported,
-          but not <literal>svn://</literal> and <literal>http://</literal>
-          or <literal>https://</literal> methods.</para>
+          directives allow to specify in-repository authorization file's location.
+          The directives accept absolute <literal>file://</literal> URLs
+          and repository relative URLs (one which begins with ^/).</para>
 
-        <para>For example, it is possible to specify absolute URL to in
-          repository authz file as shown in
+        <para>For example, it is possible to specify an absolute URL to
+          in-repository authz file as shown in
           <xref linkend="svn.serverconfig.httpd.authz.inrepo-authz.ex-1"/>.</para>
 
         <example id="svn.serverconfig.httpd.authz.inrepo-authz.ex-1">
@@ -2873,7 +2871,7 @@
         </example>
 
         <para>You can also specify relative URL to in repository authz
-          file as shown in
+          file as demonstrated in
           <xref linkend="svn.serverconfig.httpd.authz.inrepo-authz.ex-2"/>.</para>
 
         <example id="svn.serverconfig.httpd.authz.inrepo-authz.ex-2">
@@ -4490,7 +4488,7 @@
                 <literal>AuthzSVNReposRelativeAccessFile</literal> can be
                 present, but not both.</para>
               <para>Beginning with Subversion 1.8,
-                <literal>AuthzSVNAccessFile</literal> accepts URL to the file
+                <literal>AuthzSVNAccessFile</literal> accepts a URL to a file
                 stored inside a Subversion repository.  It is possible to store
                 the file in the same repository to which the access rules are
                 being applied or another repository.</para>
@@ -4557,7 +4555,7 @@
                 <literal>AuthzSVNAccessFile</literal> can be present, but not both.
                 This option is available as of Subversion 1.7.</para>
               <para>Beginning with Subversion 1.8,
-                <literal>AuthzSVNAccessFile</literal> accepts URL to the file
+                <literal>AuthzSVNAccessFile</literal> accepts a URL to a file
                 stored inside a Subversion repository.  It is possible to store
                 the file in the same repository to which the access rules are
                 being applied or another repository.</para>