[svnbook] r5203 committed - branches/1.8/vi/book/ch00-preface.xml
C. Michael Pilato
cmpilato at red-bean.com
Sat Oct 8 23:00:21 CDT 2016
Chinh Do,
Congratulations on your first commit. I've added inline below some review
comments.
-- Mike
2016-10-08 5:37 GMT-04:00 <chinhdo at users.sourceforge.net>:
> Revision: 5203
> http://sourceforge.net/p/svnbook/source/5203
> Author: chinhdo
> Date: 2016-10-08 09:37:56 +0000 (Sat, 08 Oct 2016)
> Log Message:
> -----------
> Chinh Do - Commit first translation for Preface (20% done)
>
[...]
> @@ -14,12 +14,13 @@
>
> <para>
> <indexterm>
> - <primary>Concurrent Versions System</primary>
> + <primary>Những Hệ thống Quản lý phiên bản Hiện nay</primary>
>
I'm not sure what the norm is for Vietnamese, but I'm guessing that you
shouldn't translate "Concurrent Versions System" here, as it is a proper
noun -- the full name of the CVS version control system. Moreover, a few
lines later, we use this string in the <see></see> tag (which is what
causes "see Concurrent Versions System" to appear in the book's index next
to the "CVS" entry), but folks won't find that because you translated the
<indexterm>.
</indexterm>
> <indexterm>
> <primary>CVS</primary>
> <see>Concurrent Versions System</see>
>
Here's where we reference that <indexterm>.
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