[svnbook] r5751 committed - trunk/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml

Daniel Shahaf d.s at daniel.shahaf.name
Mon Aug 20 14:12:55 CDT 2018


cmpilato at users.sourceforge.net wrote on Mon, 20 Aug 2018 14:59 +0000:
> @@ -2845,12 +2845,13 @@
> [...]
> @@ -4502,9 +4503,9 @@
>                  present, but not both.</para>
>                <para>Beginning with Subversion 1.8,
>                  <literal>AuthzSVNAccessFile</literal> accepts a URL to a file
> -                stored inside a Subversion repository.  It is possible to store
> -                the file in the same repository to which the access rules are
> -                being applied or another repository.</para>
> +                stored inside a Subversion repository—either the
> +                same repository to which the access rules are
> +                being applied, or in an entirely different repository.</para>

"either x or in y" <- stray or extraneous "in"

>  
>              </listitem>
>            </varlistentry>
> @@ -4569,9 +4570,9 @@
>                  This option is available as of Subversion 1.7.</para>
>                <para>Beginning with Subversion 1.8,
>                  <literal>AuthzSVNAccessFile</literal> accepts a URL to a file
> -                stored inside a Subversion repository.  It is possible to store
> -                the file in the same repository to which the access rules are
> -                being applied or another repository.</para>
> +                stored inside a Subversion repository—either the
> +                same repository to which the access rules are
> +                being applied, or in an entirely different repository.</para>

Ditto.

Cheers,

Daniel



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