[svnbook] r5751 committed - trunk/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml

[C. Michael Pilato]

Good catch.

On Mon, Aug 20, 2018 at 3:12 PM Daniel Shahaf <d.s at daniel.shahaf.name>
wrote:

> cmpilato at users.sourceforge.net wrote on Mon, 20 Aug 2018 14:59 +0000:
> > @@ -2845,12 +2845,13 @@
> > [...]
> > @@ -4502,9 +4503,9 @@
> >                  present, but not both.</para>
> >                <para>Beginning with Subversion 1.8,
> >                  <literal>AuthzSVNAccessFile</literal> accepts a URL to
> a file
> > -                stored inside a Subversion repository.  It is possible
> to store
> > -                the file in the same repository to which the access
> rules are
> > -                being applied or another repository.</para>
> > +                stored inside a Subversion repository—either the
> > +                same repository to which the access rules are
> > +                being applied, or in an entirely different
> repository.</para>
>
> "either x or in y" <- stray or extraneous "in"
>
> >
> >              </listitem>
> >            </varlistentry>
> > @@ -4569,9 +4570,9 @@
> >                  This option is available as of Subversion 1.7.</para>
> >                <para>Beginning with Subversion 1.8,
> >                  <literal>AuthzSVNAccessFile</literal> accepts a URL to
> a file
> > -                stored inside a Subversion repository.  It is possible
> to store
> > -                the file in the same repository to which the access
> rules are
> > -                being applied or another repository.</para>
> > +                stored inside a Subversion repository—either the
> > +                same repository to which the access rules are
> > +                being applied, or in an entirely different
> repository.</para>
>
> Ditto.
>
> Cheers,
>
> Daniel
>
>
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