[svnbook] r5733 committed - branches/1.8/de/book

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Revision: 5733
          http://sourceforge.net/p/svnbook/source/5733
Author:   jensmf
Date:     2018-07-28 13:59:39 +0000 (Sat, 28 Jul 2018)
Log Message:
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sync with en version

Modified Paths:
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    branches/1.8/de/book/ch00-preface.xml
    branches/1.8/de/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml

Modified: branches/1.8/de/book/ch00-preface.xml
===================================================================
--- branches/1.8/de/book/ch00-preface.xml	2018-07-28 03:03:52 UTC (rev 5732)
+++ branches/1.8/de/book/ch00-preface.xml	2018-07-28 13:59:39 UTC (rev 5733)
@@ -132,7 +132,7 @@
       </indexterm>Subversion is a free/open source <firstterm>version
       control system</firstterm> (VCS).  That is, Subversion manages
       files and directories, and the changes made to them, over time.
-      This allows you to recover older versions of your data or
+      This allows you to recover older versions of your data, or
       examine the history of how your data changed.  In this regard,
       many people think of a version control system as a sort
       of <quote>time machine.</quote></para>
@@ -677,7 +677,7 @@
         fit for the ASF, many of whose members were already active
         Subversion contributors.  In early 2010, Subversion was fully
         adopted into the ASF's family of top-level projects, moved its
-        project web presence to
+        web presence to
         <ulink url="http://subversion.apache.org"/>, and was
         rechristened <quote>Apache Subversion</quote>.</para>
 -->

Modified: branches/1.8/de/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml
===================================================================
--- branches/1.8/de/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml	2018-07-28 03:03:52 UTC (rev 5732)
+++ branches/1.8/de/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml	2018-07-28 13:59:39 UTC (rev 5733)
@@ -2058,7 +2058,7 @@
         section, this configuration file offers an administrator a
         complete solution for governing user authentication and
         authorization policies.  Each of the files we'll discuss uses
-        the format common to other configuration files (see
+        the same format common to other configuration files (see
         <xref linkend="svn.advanced.confarea"/>): section names are
         marked by square brackets (<literal>[</literal>
         and <literal>]</literal>), comments begin with hashes
@@ -2599,8 +2599,7 @@
           how to configure the server appropriately for each.  For the
           purposes of this discussion, we'll just demonstrate a simple
           example of configuring the DIGEST-MD5 mechanism.  For
-          example, if your <filename>subversion.conf</filename>
-          (or <filename>svn.conf</filename>) file contains the
+          example, if your <filename>svn.conf</filename> file contains the
           following:</para>
 -->
         <para>Da SASL so viele unterschiedliche Arten von
@@ -2614,7 +2613,6 @@
           entsprechende Konfiguration des Servers. Für die Erörterung
           an dieser Stelle zeigen wir ein einfaches Beispiel der
           Konfiguration des DIGEST-MD5 Mechanismus. Wenn Ihre Datei
-          <filename>subversion.conf</filename> (oder
           <filename>svn.conf</filename>) beispielsweise folgenden
           Inhalt hat:</para>