[svnbook] r5800 committed - trunk/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml

Daniel Shahaf d.s at daniel.shahaf.name
Sun Oct 14 08:40:28 CDT 2018


wuzhouhui at users.sourceforge.net wrote on Sun, 14 Oct 2018 02:55 +0000:
> +++ trunk/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml	2018-10-14 02:55:41 UTC (rev 5800)
> @@ -4560,10 +4560,10 @@
>                  Subversion repository.  Unlike
>                  <literal>AuthzSVNAccessFile</literal>, the path specified
>                  for <literal>AuthzSVNReposRelativeAccessFile</literal> is
> -                relative from the <filename>conf/</filename> directory in
> +                relative to the <filename>conf/</filename> directory in
>                  the repository on filesystem.

"the repository on filesystem" is ungrammatical.  I'd probably change it
to "on-disk" because the term "filesystem" can be ambiguous.

>                  In other words, the <replaceable>file-path</replaceable>
> -                specifies a per repository file that must by accessible by
> +                specifies a per repository file that must be accessible by

Should "per repository" be hyphenated?

>                  the relative path for all repositories in a configuration block.
>                  In a configuration block for a Subversion repository or a collection
>                  of repositories either this directive or



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