[svnbook commit] r3257 - trunk/src/en/book

[cmpilato]

Author: cmpilato
Date: Thu Aug  7 13:34:18 2008
New Revision: 3257

Log:
Tweak-a-word here, tweak-a-word there, tweak-a-word everywhere.

Modified:
   trunk/src/en/book/ch00-preface.xml

Modified: trunk/src/en/book/ch00-preface.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/src/en/book/ch00-preface.xml	(original)
+++ trunk/src/en/book/ch00-preface.xml	Thu Aug  7 13:34:18 2008
@@ -198,7 +198,7 @@
   <sect1 id="svn.preface.conventions">
     <title>Conventions Used in This Book</title>
         
-    <para>We use the following typographic conventions in this
+    <para>The following typographic conventions are used in this 
       book:</para>
 
     <variablelist>
@@ -234,8 +234,8 @@
 
     </variablelist>
 
-    <para>We sprinkled especially interesting, helpful, or important
-      bits of knowledge throughout the book (in contextually relevant
+    <para>Also, we sprinkled especially helpful or important bits of
+      information throughout the book (in contextually relevant
       locations), set off visually so they're easy to find.  Look for
       the following icons as you read:</para>