[svnbook] r5751 committed - trunk/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml

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Revision: 5751
          http://sourceforge.net/p/svnbook/source/5751
Author:   cmpilato
Date:     2018-08-20 14:59:05 +0000 (Mon, 20 Aug 2018)
Log Message:
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* en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml
  Fix the wording around versioned authz files.

Modified Paths:
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    trunk/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml

Modified: trunk/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml
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--- trunk/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml	2018-08-18 13:48:34 UTC (rev 5750)
+++ trunk/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml	2018-08-20 14:59:05 UTC (rev 5751)
@@ -2845,12 +2845,13 @@
       <sect3 id="svn.serverconfig.httpd.authz.inrepo-authz">
         <title>Versioned in repository access files</title>
 
-        <para>Beginning with Subversion 1.8, access files can be stored
-          inside a Subversion repository.  It is possible to store the
-          access file in the same repository to which the
-          access rules are being applied to another repository.  This
-          approach enables versioning features of Subversion for
-          the path-based authorization configuration.</para>
+        <para>Beginning with Subversion 1.8, access files can be
+          stored inside a Subversion repository.  It is possible to
+          store the access file in the same repository to which the
+          access rules are being applied, or you can store it in an
+          entirely different repository.  This approach enables
+          versioning features of Subversion for the path-based
+          authorization configuration.</para>
 
         <para>Both <literal>AuthzSVNAccessFile</literal> and
           <literal>AuthzSVNReposRelativeAccessFile</literal> configuration
@@ -4502,9 +4503,9 @@
                 present, but not both.</para>
               <para>Beginning with Subversion 1.8,
                 <literal>AuthzSVNAccessFile</literal> accepts a URL to a file
-                stored inside a Subversion repository.  It is possible to store
-                the file in the same repository to which the access rules are
-                being applied or another repository.</para>
+                stored inside a Subversion repository—either the
+                same repository to which the access rules are
+                being applied, or in an entirely different repository.</para>
 
             </listitem>
           </varlistentry>
@@ -4569,9 +4570,9 @@
                 This option is available as of Subversion 1.7.</para>
               <para>Beginning with Subversion 1.8,
                 <literal>AuthzSVNAccessFile</literal> accepts a URL to a file
-                stored inside a Subversion repository.  It is possible to store
-                the file in the same repository to which the access rules are
-                being applied or another repository.</para>
+                stored inside a Subversion repository—either the
+                same repository to which the access rules are
+                being applied, or in an entirely different repository.</para>
 
             </listitem>
           </varlistentry>