[svnbook] r5800 committed - trunk/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml

[Daniel Shahaf]

Nathan Hartman wrote on Sun, 14 Oct 2018 12:37 -0400:
> On Sun, Oct 14, 2018 at 9:58 AM Daniel Shahaf <d.s at daniel.shahaf.name>
> wrote:
> 
> > wuzhouhui at users.sourceforge.net wrote on Sun, 14 Oct 2018 02:55 +0000:
> > > +++ trunk/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml       2018-10-14
> > 02:55:41 UTC (rev 5800)
> > > @@ -4560,10 +4560,10 @@
> > >                  Subversion repository.  Unlike
> > >                  <literal>AuthzSVNAccessFile</literal>, the path
> > specified
> > >                  for <literal>AuthzSVNReposRelativeAccessFile</literal>
> > is
> > > -                relative from the <filename>conf/</filename> directory
> > in
> > > +                relative to the <filename>conf/</filename> directory in
> > >                  the repository on filesystem.
> >
> > "the repository on filesystem" is ungrammatical.  I'd probably change it
> > to "on-disk" because the term "filesystem" can be ambiguous.
> >
> (Perhaps omit "on disk" altogether? The repository is, by definition, the
> directory containing conf/, etc.)

You know that, I know that, but a reader might think that "the directory
`conf/` in the repository" refers to a versioned directory at ^/conf
(which would be incorrect, but still).