[svnbook] r5800 committed - trunk/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml

[Nathan Hartman]

On Sun, Oct 14, 2018 at 9:58 AM Daniel Shahaf <d.s at daniel.shahaf.name>
wrote:

> wuzhouhui at users.sourceforge.net wrote on Sun, 14 Oct 2018 02:55 +0000:
> > +++ trunk/en/book/ch06-server-configuration.xml       2018-10-14
> 02:55:41 UTC (rev 5800)
> > @@ -4560,10 +4560,10 @@
> >                  Subversion repository.  Unlike
> >                  <literal>AuthzSVNAccessFile</literal>, the path
> specified
> >                  for <literal>AuthzSVNReposRelativeAccessFile</literal>
> is
> > -                relative from the <filename>conf/</filename> directory
> in
> > +                relative to the <filename>conf/</filename> directory in
> >                  the repository on filesystem.
>
> "the repository on filesystem" is ungrammatical.  I'd probably change it
> to "on-disk" because the term "filesystem" can be ambiguous.
>
> >                  In other words, the <replaceable>file-path</replaceable>
> > -                specifies a per repository file that must by accessible
> by
> > +                specifies a per repository file that must be accessible
> by
>
> Should "per repository" be hyphenated?


I would hyphenate "per-repository" but not "on disk."

(Perhaps omit "on disk" altogether? The repository is, by definition, the
directory containing conf/, etc.)
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